aight 10 to 15 lines
no blah blah blah blah blah

verses due by tomorrow


gl dog

i said 10 line max but checkin in can you drop your verse in 10 mins? if yes so we can finish our battle already~1

Ya Like To Stick Erected Dicks In Ya Ear To Help You Think Harder....
Like Local Collect Calls Going The Distance With Panik, You Ain't Get Farther.....
The Way I Spit Will Leave You In Mid Seizure, Aint Complete But Slim Is Half Shook....
I Don't Know What You Do,Im Not Known To Have Guys Names In My Black Book....
I’m Causin Agony To Slim By Meerly Liftin a Thumb...While The Pain You Inflicted is None....
Your About As Gifted as Dumb ...Velcro Pistol Grips....Dont Allow ya ta ...Stick To Ya Guns...
Im Smoking This Dude Over Tha Fued Which I Hope to Inturde, Viens Elope And Elude.....
Cuz this Pussy Couldnt Blow Up If I Shoved Grenades In His Philopiahn tube....
How You Gonna fight Dis Boss? Told You I'm Never Crossed...
Slim You Not A Chef So Why You The First One In The Cell Askin Who Want They Salad tossed.....
This Kid Is Fake If I Ever See You In The Streets I'm Snatchin Your Tims.....
But Then Again Battlin I Should Of Just Read Your Name Cause Your Winning Chances Are Slim.......(Va Slim)

^^ No Personals O Well Just A Quick Battle~1

dog why'd ya want to battle when you cant jump to my level//
elevate all you want and your still a roach that wants to dishevel//
the only reason ya spit ill is cause your infected with aids//
he cant throw one punch they're all deffective or strays //
you could never land a punch even if you stole one from chrit//
to get a winnin record you must have been suckin his dick//
you cant run with the big dogs so stay the fuck off the porch//
even your avitar agrees that you shouldnt be in this sport//
you feel the way my puches HIT and then start to PANIC//
I'll sink ya to the lowest level there is like your the titanic//


there its not that good cause I had to rush through it but there it is and its only ten lines are you happy

explanations

dishevel means to rumble
infected with aids just check out his sig
the big dogs and avitar line his avitar is a dog thus the big dogs and his av is always shaking his head yes so it always agrees with whatever you say

that should be it

oh and the one that I forgot look at what level he is at it says something about a cockroach that explains the second line

Nice battle. Can you guys both drop a quick vote on here so I can open up a thread? I'll be back to vote on this with an explanation in like an hour when I have enough votes. Peace http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91471

i been voted homie so hollaz back when you come back or somethin and people honest votes please cause i wanna a straight open battle~1

great battle...

both were good but in my mind i think hit'panik took this one..... i think a lil harder punches thats all

return favor......agaisnt lyrical disaster

(ill vote when i got my 100 votes) (sorry)

Good battle. $lim's really elavatin but Hit'Panik just tokk it on punches and creativity. Not much separatin this but that did.
Vote Hit'Panik

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1940 - 2002

In Respect

wutup hit panik.
this was a good battle.
both are dope
slim's closer was wack...
hits verse was better...in most aspects, but hit didnt kill him, just was slightly better

vote hit

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man that was a fuckin dick ride vote and you know it hit the mother fucker even said what up hit that shit needs to get taken off the poll

just because i said "wutup" doesnt mean shit. that shit was a fucking honest vote...calm the fuck down. panik hit harder than you, he didnt blow you out, he just hit harder. if panik came wack...then i would tell him he came fucking wack. but its obvious he hit harder than you.

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structure:Slim
Punches:Hit
Creativity:Hit
Flow:About Even

this was a so so battle..va is still elevatin...next time put more thought into it..harder punches...n more werdplay n u should do better
good battle i think hit took it jus by a lil though
vote:hit

hit up my battle fairly..holla
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=90489

Hey yo not a bad battle.
Flow: Slim
Structure:Slim
Opener:Slim
Closer:Panik
Overall:Slim
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