3-8 barz
no feedin
no crew
no hate
no d/r
U drop first

Black guy ya whackass tryna battle wit a record like dat ya ass get no respect//
….this D-town “clown” get dropped more than them” Barnum Baily“ rejects//
Black guy…ya makin us look bad u best 2 put a cork in it like Sammy Sosa//
….0-2 and ya aint goin no where cause my rhymes got u drunk like mimosa//
Ya rhymes are shitty in all aspects of da battle so I’m runnin 2 get the scooper//
Cause BG you dont fit in the rap game like Yao Ming drivin a Mini Cooper//
I consider BG a“rapist” like “Kobe” cause ya punches “completely forced”//
I dont need quotes to explain my bars i juss shatter this wannabe’s Corpse//
joined in “September” so i’ma have u crashing like the da “towers” in “ny”//
Cause ya 303 niggaz aint nuttin but bitches I’ll make ya death rate multiply//
I got the perfect place fo ya newbie rhymes they belong on an old dusty shelf//
The only way u get wins if u follow brooklyns steps and dickride your self//
Ya from da 303 u can take off 30 and that’s ya amount of losses ya got//
Yo ass is losing this is another onlaught,like an inaccurate Qb ya is droped//
My rhymes injected you wit a sickness soon you’ll be found dead in a ditch//
this is my last line have u shocked like them tapes of r.kelly fuckin that bitch//

my bad dogg my computer has been down

aiight here i go:

been gon for a minute 0-2 and im feenin for a win>
(dont dis the 303)i dont believe you were talkin shit when dees black balls slapped your chin>

As mutherfuckin predictible like steven spielberg movies>
here talkin shit i'll put u in your place you fuckin newbie>

my rhymes were whack seems like i couldnt cop a win>
i got news for you bitch now is now and then was then>


this is gonna be my last bar cause i think you had enough>
"fuckin newbies these days actin like there tough>

OPener: Black
Closer: Skeemz
Flow: Black
Punches: Skeemz
Personals: Skeemz
Win: Skeemz

Can yall hit this up http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92298

yo dogs dont sleep on this shit
hit this one up too
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2

uppin 4 votes
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Uppin 4 votes
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Uppin 4 votes
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DAMN QUIT SLEEPIN ON DIS BATTLE
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^^lamo u betta quit uppin dis but yea skeem got this fo harder , punches,disses,and personals.......................................

Skeemz takes this....

Better verse...
Overall...
Better punches etc..

Vote- Skeemz

Opener:Tie
Close Skeemz
Vocab Skeemz
Punches Skeemz
Wordplay/Creativity Skeemz
Overall: skeemz
Vote skeemz

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

i think skeemz took this battle with an over all better verse

and i was feeling his punches nad wordplay more

was a good battle

i think black guy could of had more in his verse , didn't really look like he tried

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