10 lines you spit 1st
then ill drop Holla

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Aight im ready to get ma faced kicked in....

Duce ya free style rap shit is screwin' ma brain/
Everybody's wonderin' how im still fuckin' sane//
Ur just another white rapper wit no skill an' high dreams/
When you spit on stage all ya can hear is the audiences' screams//
Ur track "rain down on me" seemed more like a hurricane/
But when im done wit you ill be sendin ur drizzle down the drain//
"Uve been judged" (another ODP track) an the verdict is this; uve been charged wit "witch kraft"/ (another ODP track)
Spit my lyrics like a fist; knock ya to the ground an ya get bitch slapped//
Hell the nazi's coulda used ur lyrics in world domination/
Coulda drove the entire jewish population mad; putting them all in verbal incarseration//

With bad structure, played punches, No Limit Tank lines/
No wonder your new sported the words of Dank Rhyme!!//
Coveted BATTLE TITLE...only the victorious seek it/
While A77icuS shows up a pussy like Victoria's Secret //
Notoriously dressin' in sequins, spittin' in a bitch's stance/
Don't know whether to battle you or unzip my pants//
Gloriously rip your mandible with my member, speaking of which/
Tha Duce Claims Blood? After this, a hemorrhaging bitch?//
A77iCuS can't hide or duck this, above heads like Carter/
The only belt you'll wear and tug on begins with "garter"//
With side burns rhyming from a paticular farmer's guide/
Crash course in battling me is a vehicular homicide... Grave Fill'd//

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i would vote duce he had better punches while atticus just had good flow and content. i got booted and had a little longer response then this but i can't poll yet. hit my battles up anyway i'll get you back when i can.

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opener:Duce
closer:Tie
wordplay:Tie
structure:Duce
punches:Duce
overall:Duce


nice battle peeps, jus keep on elevatin.

no hate

aiight

peace

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yo im wid everyone the duce took

my vote is on you
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thanks Keep the votes coming
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ya duce took this good job duce the other guy again was pretty garbage and DUCE YOU NEED TO UP YOUR COMPETITORS YOU FACING ALL THESE WEAK KIDS your not getting any experience your just awsting your lyrics face a good rapper then you won't be wasting your lyrics and you'll be getting experience

there the ones calling me out. I dont even battle so I just fuck around but thanks Holla
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thats wat i posted

but i forgot to drop this link

honest votes




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