6-10 lines
No hate, crew, DR or Bull shit votes
5 votes wins

checkin in .................................................. .................................................. ......................G'luck

checkin in playa lets do this.............................................. .................................................. .....................................

yo TAG merk this bitch.........................

this is gonna be 'LYRICAL MURDER' for u mista raedar

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Hey yo this kids a lightweight and still 2 and 5
And he's steppin to a vet now this bitch is gonna die/
Mista your Raedar aint able to handle my flow
Cause I spit so fast it reads "Location Unknown"/
I spit with fury that is meant to overwhelm you
You pussy and a chicken who got put on my menu/
My lyrics are sharp they're like a mutha fuckin raza (razor)
And you'll fell my burn when I spit my shit will graze ya/
You can't deal with the ammount of skills that I possess
You should wear a sign that says "Merkin in progress"

I'll turn TAG into a transvestite,got him(her) trying to pose like the girl in his picture/
This kids throwing bad strikes like a tired-out pitcha,the M.I may of missed ya,but the STARAEDAR is definitely going to hit ya/

Try and print my lyrics,you can't touch them because my lines is sharp,leavin you with paper cuts/

My lyrics will leave you mentally challenged,everytime someone ask you a question you like uhhhhh.wuh(retarded voice)
I'm robbing your house like a criminal Santa/
Didn't your mom ever tell you not to battle against hot kidzz gotta teach you some manners/

Everyones trying to punk me because i carry the magic pen in my pocket/
My lyrics will light you up,got you exploding,blasting off like bottled rockets/

You can't step to me like you running towards me on a fast,downwards escalater/
My rhymes will leave your breathless,got you looking for a resperator

Open- mr
Metas - none
Creavitity - tie
Personals - tag
Flow - tag
Finish - tag
Abuse - tie

vote = tag,

mr - if u tightened up ya flow a lot it would make the lines a lot sharper. ex) instead of 'everytime someone ask you.....', just go wit 'asked a question....'

lol i'm alwayz goign out like that..........shit mayn damnit i am too based on punchlines i don't give a shit how i put it..........

Ok, Tag, basic verse, you didn't do much with it.
raeadar, you had weak punches, and no flow, work on both those

Vote TAG

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92939

Hit dat up^

good flows
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last line of tag was finished
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mista fix yer fuckin structure for reals
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im tired of people talking shit but avatars its fuckin gay
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some of mistas bars were ok some wak
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overall tag got this cuz his shit was thought out more cleverly
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personals/tag
punches/tag
wordplay/tag
flow/tie
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vote/tag
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hey someone get at this shit please
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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=91980
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uppin fo some votes (2)
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opener:Tie
closer:Tie
wordplay:Tie
structure:Tag
punches:Tag
overall:Tag


pretty close battle, tag got it with his punches though, mista rader some of your lines were a little stretched.

i took the time to vote on this battle so will you please hit the battle in my sig up, with an honest vote.

aight

peace

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k tag took this, but not by much, you both need to elevate, and the other guy, fuck dude, ever heard or structur?, anyways, my vote goes to tag.............
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