OK
this is my check in
i'll expect you 2 check in
then the timelimit will start
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all rules apply like i said at my callout
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yeah checkin in kid lets go................................................ ...........................

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I wish U neva would of challenged such a demalishinized prodigy of genasides
Eyes kiss threw floods as U benge out all yer defeat & b-come paralized
I'll fuck up yer pychological pattern with the magnitude of cataclizmics
Make U wish that yer torment would B that of less pain, but no its catastrawfics
Calling me a kid when U a fuckin infant, murder U before U were even existant
Falling down shadered dreams n instants, no wish will bring hope yer non existense
Everything U have dispursed my direction has been clowned at severely
My giants at our dwellings have discussed yer flow & were apaled sincerly
Grasp ya most potencials & instrumentals then abliverate all meanings
Gaze yer post concentials & cradentials then discombobulate all
reasonings
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U have half an hour or so 2 drop ya verse
then i'll notafy a mod to settle this a no show
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yo ill post my verse in 5 mins kid............................................... .................................................. ..

Ya shopping blind names..you just don’t know whats in store..
You couldnt win this battle even if i stopped at line four..
Your profile says your alive when your gunna get shook..
Treat you like powdered cocain cause you bound to be cooked..
Im fucking you hard names...no need for lubrication..
Cause you bout as tight as a prostitute with an std infection..
Ive cum hard into this pussy without a form of protection..
Now names wishin he never jumped on this erection..
Your verse was like garbage better off being tossed..
like hospital escape's my patients for you is lost..

wickid battle and a good vote for who im voting for

Opening-names
Punches-names
Flow-WISH
WORDplay vocab-*names ! hot shit!!
Ending-Tie

Overall - Names

i would vote wish if i could poll. he had better punches. names verse was okay lot of wordplay but no hard punches.

peep my battles anyway even though i can't vote doesn't mean you can't.

im not gonna vote cuz i hate names so thats beef votes. but check open mic names...yeah....

work on ya lines they are too line and stop tryin to show off with ya fancy vocab, its not helpin. concnetrate on whittyness

punches: names
flow: wish
personals: nill
wordplay: names
vocab: names
structure: wish
enjoyment: names
vote: names

nice battle!

weak battle

flow = wish
structure = wish
creativity= names
punches = none

vote = wish
notthing hard...but none came hard...but wish kept his flow consistent n his structure as well

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93087

uppin fo votes (1)............................................... ....................................

yo uppin fo votes (2)............................................... .................................................. ......................

Yeah i think wish took this even tho names had better vocab he had weak punches so if i could vote i think wish would take this