15-20 lines.
No feeding.
5 votes win.
i go first.
i g 15 minutes to drop my verse after u check in an u got 15 minutes to drop urs after i drop mine.

Now J.K.O went on 'bitch slapped' 2 call me out and branded me a bitch,
This battles gonna be a T.K.O, coz u aint got the skillz 2 match this, BITCH!!/
Now this bitch wanted 2 'bump heads' so he tried 2 step 2 me,
But if we werent battling u'd vote for this verse, coz u know i'm the more skilled MC/
Like 'Scary Movie', i'll make a parody out of ur fucked up rhymes,
actually scratch that, coz ur funny, coz ur wack wen u write ur best bar/lines./
I feel sympathetic for u tho, coz u seem more confused than ur sexuality at times,
This is the RAP elite scene, bring ur weak ass lines to another site/
Like a comic i'll make a joke of u, like an interviewer i'll put u on the spot,
U got a much chance of winning this battle as a 'dumb' tryna rap, and a transexual dyslexic tryna get kocc/(Cock)
So come on then bitch hit me with ur weak ass lines,
and jus' to help u get started, u can even quote some of mine/

yo im checkin in i will spit later cause theres only a couple minutes lef in my computer class

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im a exterminator,tougher than the terminater/
scared this kid so he cant have sex, so he checks in to the vibrator/
bitch knew his ass was gonna lose, so he has to ask for dick favors/
you thought you were a player,walkin on my turf/
but you got slurped,your just a scared stupid jerk/
da chronic g you a chicken, i barely move and he starts to flinchen/
and you i was trippin, bitch you make me sicken/
now just listen, i could beat your ass even if i was limpin/
stupid faggot why did you even except/
this match, its like you crazy except you keepin it real like safe sex/
you got a fucked up name, its pure lame/
your like your name, your never gonna get just a little fame/


havent battle forever so yep theres my verse^^^^^

im a exterminator,tougher than the terminater/
scared this kid so he cant have sex, so he checks in to the vibrator/
bitch knew his ass was gonna lose, so he has to ask for dick favors/
you thought you were a player,walkin on my turf/
but you got slurped,your just a scared stupid jerk/
da chronic g you a chicken, i barely move and he starts to flinchen/
and you thought i was trippin, bitch you make me sicken/
now just listen, i could beat your ass even if i was limpin/
stupid faggot why did you even except/
this match, its like you crazy except you keepin it real like safe sex/
you got a fucked up name, its pure lame/
your like your name, your never gonna get just a little fame/

had to fix thed thought in the fourth line

sorry about that

uppin for some votes comeon ppl aint that hard to vote

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uppin for votes, do not sleep on this ppl.
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OPeneR: Tie
Closer: Chronic
Flow: none
Personals: Chronic
Punches: JKO
Win: Chronic
Can yall hit this up with an honest vote? http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93223

My vote goes to J.K.O coz I feel he had better humor used in the battle, both openers were good although DCG had a stronger finish... vote= J.K.O plz hit up my battle to return the favor... much needed I only need 1 more vote, thanx.

I forgot to post the link to my battle... please drop your vote much appriciated

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=92827

uppin.2. dnt sleep on this.
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uppin comeon yall 2

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JkO: good hits n flow, much better flow than DCG...

DCG: stopped wit strected lines, it don't help, good hits though

it was even so it came down to flow which i felt JkO had a lil better so JkO gets this...

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Very close battle...

Both ya'll need ta elevate ya wordplay and punches...

Seriously.

But for better structure, rhyme scheme, flow and punches...

JKO.

Peace

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