good quick battle

6-8lines/3-4 bars

we spit in 20 min after u check in

house rules

all votes explained

show up and check in

yo i gotta spit later

u can lay the shit down and ill spit later

or we can wait it dont matter

we cant feed off of the verses anway

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see in yo thing it says dont sleep//but yet ur gonna go away wit no excuse...man thats cheap//come bac and spit later, ok//i actually have no respect for u now since u turned gay//u got a 20 minute nap and i hope u sleep well//cuz wen u come bac ur gonna read ur worst nightmare...its gonna get worse, cant u tell?!//BEEP BEEP...ur alarm clock is goin off awake!//i can tell ur searchin website...sopyin and pastin...wat a fake//

yo dont spit shit thats even really worth readin
ill let you feed n i wont be beaten u why the voters are sleepin
my calculations were correct ive stumbled on to a red neck
yo sig is wrong, yo head is good cuz it bounces like bad checks
its fate in what we make...yo ass get set to terminate
now to get ya skull crushed like a brick off the empire state
you wont spill much while i lyrically twist yo spinal cord
run ya over and trample ya like im a homicidal horde

lol

one

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yo well aight ummm....
both need alot of work
but due to better structure
better opener and closer
also punchlines(like one or another)
i give this to



Bigjoke



peace

uppin
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punches: bj
flow: bj
personals: em
structure: em
enjoyment: bj
vote: bj

weak battle both need to elevate!

peace

thx 4 votes

2nd uppin..........

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this is pretty pathetic...eminem ur wack, bj, ur wack too but better than eminem.
vote-bj

no need to explain. eminem, you need MAD elevation

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Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)