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6 lines= 3 barz
reply by 2moro night (try as early as possible)
ima spit first
2moro

peace

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peace

My Verse:

Come on Jay dont u know my lyrics packs intensity that will scare u outa ur witts, cuz just as u c my punchlines u'll be scared of them/
U've just made the biggest mistake in ur entire puny life by battling me cuz ima ring ur rap career to an abrupt end//

This is ur first battle on this site and ima make it unforgetable, dont gert me wrong/
One sided battle..... well this is one cuz u couldnt throw lyrical punches if u had lyrical gloves on//

It will be est if u no show cuz u'll have less embarassment on ur pride.... so i think u should do that/
But if u do decide to show bring all ur stocks u got cuz u'll need them dats da fact//

peace

i'm a vote on this wen the oder kid spits, i should hav enough pms by then, pretty good verse ur lines went on a bit tho!pz............................................ .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .......
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=1

check this loss u mite wanna battle me if u think u can beat me

upping ur verse...............................
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peace

come on dawg spit ur shit quick ..................................
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peace

My fault! I didn't know that you set up a battle b/w you and I. When did I accept a battle call from rap jesus?

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

in bitch slap when u made an open challenge and iaccepted and said to set it up but u didnt so i did it!

peace

Aight dawg! Then let me rip it like this!............................................. .......................................

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

Look here quere:

Headline:

"Jay Jay at last he releases, to smash to pieces the Rap Jesus with his rap thesis"
and that's the reason I'm back from recess, to create masterpieces with mad adhesiveness,

I'll have ya mad at the ease of this, while ya sayin' ya own name in vane,
ya blamin' it on the rain like Milli Vanilli, but my intention remains the same,

better gather ya thirteen rap disciples, matter of fact, snatch a whole batch of rap Moses's,
but after I snap with my rap compulsiveness, you'll notice the explosiveness ya can't get close to this.

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

uppin' fo votes!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
check this battle out my peeps!

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.

nice spit dawg upping for votes .................................................. .....................................

peace

flow=Jay Jay
wordplay=neither
vocab=Jay Jay
punches=Jesus

vote=Jay Jay

shorten ur line length,and a little mo' vocab, and u could drop some ill spits RJ.

SG,

we needs ta battle

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I'm a disaster waitin' to happen ya seen, but I'd rather be masterbatin' to a magazine.