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explain all votes


check in and spit..........dont take all day

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this is my check in................... spit already nigga



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I aint even gotta Spit'...E-Coli?~Its evident I jus Cough-n-he-Drops/
Like a Cop under Moss~I leave dis CatBack more than performance Exhaust-/1
Wit'Minimal skill's an a rek showin ILL its easy to see ya fill dil's in a ya Bill-
This aint a Merk-its a kill-for real...Render'ya will-softer than a flinstone pill/2
No Set'Baks...I C He's Scratchin for thoughts^-I cure... and Key his Cerebrum-
Str8 to his Dome-Meltin'Chrome...Mind'Set crumbling like Rome's Colliseum-/3
Exclaimin Feed Off This as if ya spit was summin otha than Worth-Less'..to me
When in reality when peeps view ya Battles they veiw it as an anal oppertunity/4
For a Kid that talks much shit-I expected sum spit-above a mr. iceman06-
Thread free of Lik's ta Fix-wit out dicks..E.coli sports a record flipped~/5

check his profile.......and his first win was against bigjoke


QUICK KEYSTLYE

he has cyphilis and aids...this aint a lie its just realness....
this nigga gonna be the first on RB to actually die from his illness...
this dude must really want a L he wont quit pm’m me....
check his profile...this faggots a advertising billboard for std’s....
his occupation is disease???anyday now hes due to croak....
cyhilaids thinks hes a vet but his best win was a bigjoke...
he kept beggin me to battle...he must like to prewrite....
i kicked out all his fuckin teeth yet he still tries to bite...
fuck ya stretched bars...this nigga prewrote for hours....
he went to the tanning both 1 time...
....now he keeps sayin hes down wit black power...
add ya win total to your IQ and your grand total is 2....
merked u...now its time to smack the bitch that gave birth to u....


THIS MERKING IS OVER

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flow:e.coli...otha cat shit was streched
disses:=...
personals:ecoli...killed that subject
punches:e.coli
complexity:ecoli
vocab:=

Vote:e.coli

Both ya show good sportsmanship and hit dis up honestly
http://rapbattles.com/forum/showthr...0046#post930046

wordplay-cyph
meti4's-cyph
multi's-cyph
structure-coli
flow-coli
punches-cyph

vote-cyph

this battle was one sided cyph's verse was WAYYYY more complex andhit way harder

well those are two completly diffrent breakdowns...........thanks for the feeback..................lets get some votes in here

enjoyment - ecoli
metaphors - none
wordplay - ecoli
structure - ecoli
opener - ecoli
closer - ecoli
creativity - ecoli
overal - ecoli

Phayme Vs eMiNiM MiNiS

uppin(1)


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uppin(2)

please dont sleep on this

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flow:e.coli
personals:ecoli
punches:e.coli
creativity:ecoli

Vote:e.coli


hit thi battle up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=93576

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