checkin in 16-30 lines

post by tonight and i'll be happy

checkin ^^didnt see it lastnight so sorry u cant be happy but u forgot the other rules


no recycling no feeding no biting
no crew votes hate votes dick ride/titty votes
due date 2 days at the most
first to 5 wins first to 3 ko

^^^^ allright but just so you there is no KO we use the poll system

and I know your new so don't up this post for votes more than 5 times between the both of us otherwise it will get dlelted.


My Verse:
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I didn’t want to take this kid lightly…but I think he just might have cancer
So I just posted first hoping the TheraP wouldn’t last long enough for him to answer
This bitch is constantly biting…and claiming it’s subliminal
I could describe him in two words…Never Original
This faggot posts a battle call and when I respond he says nevermind
And then turns his back to me when I spit because he only receives bars from behind (tha butt)
I’m sorry…I shouldn’t have called this sick kid gay with so little inspection
But if weak rhymes are a turn on…this kid just gives me an erection
I wanted to make it a good battle…so I honestly agreed to do his best
Too bad I could have merked him w/ one line….you could just fill in the rest:”_________”
…filler…………filler…………blah blah……filler……… “PUNCHLINE!”
see ^^^ I spit fillers iller than everyone of his punchlines
and I know it’s not right….cuz it’s not at all like me to tattle
but I think I caught this kid searching for lines in RB’s closed battles
it seems right though…obviously this kid crumbles at crunchtime
serving lines more recycled than the Main page’s featured punchlines
I’m only 25% percent and beaten you, you need to make like a DJ and get a Clue
fuck a closer…
let cancer him kill him…I could…but I got better shit to do
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Compliments of Un...........

what tha fucc iz up with your fake personals lol

[/b]decipher the difference,i have hyper intensions in rival fueds~
riots spew'd and you just lacking good shit like diet foods~
bash this bitch practice spits cause your ass at this~
lryical terrorist,i put out a civil rap to diss-political activist ~
as often as this used to droppin shit while coppin wits~
murderous chick leavin more stains on ya shirt then koolaid spills to project kids~
stress boldest as the death toll hits as text flows lift~
this kids rhyme scheme's unheard of like deaf Poets~
the best soviet to fold and shift your vocals until your neck and throat splits~
see^im killer with fillers unlike u bound in wisdwom~
i'll drown tendons and your slow with delivery like mail men with down syndrome~
my rounds end em' body found in slum with out a sound in him~
lay down the rhyme factors,simply UNEM's not CEE'n me like im bein faced against blind rappers~
ill find laughter,define bastards Keymo thera p's a suvivor and you just dying faster~
but ill just end the games bend this lame and attack him by forcing more~
contorsing sores and i'd accuse u of stealin my bars like fat black kids at asian grocerie stores~[/b]

uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. ....

flow...Un
punchlines Un
Creativity Un
Open close Un
Overall Un

Un took this battle easy he had one hard hittin battle verse keep that shit up man pz props to both of you

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Open Mics
The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

^eh no not explained enuff come back and qoute n shyt it seem like u just replied to get a link for ya own battle come back n do the shyt ova 0-0

Move threads get out the way...get out the bitches get out the way

Un and Kemo movin up to the top of the page vote on my battle hoes

Keymo, Not Bad For A Newbie...Pretty Good, But You Lack Punches...You Just Spittin The Dictionary At Us...

Un...Nice Shit...Good Flow, Punches, Personals...Everything Was Awesome...

Keymo...Keep Battling...

…filler…………filler…………blah blah……filler……… “PUNCHLINE!”
see ^^^ I spit fillers iller than everyone of his punchlines


VOTE=UNEMCEEABLE

i was feeling this a little, atleast both had good flows. But un had the better personals and punches. Keymo your verse was okay but need to setup the punches better. Vote is unemceebale

Look and vote in the sig thanks.

un had a nice opener..nice wordplay on the name..betta punches..
nicer flow..last line was a killa..

key had a few played lines...did'nt have any good disses..punches did'nt carry enuff weight...her closer
was garbage.....{downin blacks with played ass punches}

vote un!