8 lines
no DR,biting,CV
check in
1 hour to spit
you spit first
good luck

lets go dawg.............................................. ...........................checkin in................................................ .............

8 lines seems long but ill give it my best shot, not that im complaining cuz im hot,and your NOT!
your an imposter and im the real thing stop playin wit yourself and start typing something.
your 2n0 well ur bout to go 2n1 sadly,your mom forgot to tell u somethin im your daddy.
youve just been burned 3 times i won't go for a forth, i show mercey to those who look like a buck teeth horse.

Thanks for the chance.
I definently lost.
Good Luck

aiight dawg i aint even gonna waste good lines for this...

This kid joined in dec,consider this an early christmas present/
Open it up, It's a big Loss,shit aint plesent/

smack E from the front to the backlines,from the ok to the wacklines/
He started off happy now its the story of the good to the bad times/

This kid knew he fucked up,got him tryin to edit his post/
tryin to shoot punches at me is like tryin to hit a ghost/

Even if you was on the KitKat commercial i aint giving you a break/
This aint even a battle there aint no option its take or take/

Got this kid retarted now he elevating backwards/
This kid never heard of hot,he only spit wack-words/

yeah the wordplay

no option its take or take=you know the saying its give or take .................................................. ..

well of course C-rocka had this one but its no suprise if you battle a kid who is still trying to figure out the site and you got a 2 0 record thats cold let the young one battle pups b4 the big dogs

hey dawg he asked to challenge me and this is a good way to get sum pointers AND I ONLY JOINED YESTERDAY! lol but thanx for the vote

Hm. My vote goes...to.....it's going to be a surprise...i swear...C Rocka! Okay, maybe not. No competititon. Battle me sometime man. Also, i don't think you polled in on my battle vs. Rhymes so if you could do that and kill that battle i'd be forever grateful. Peace.

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justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

aigth c rocka took this, kid wasnt even ready for a battle, no disses, being cocky with nothign at all to back it up is never a good idea....im not at all saying that c rocka's verse was that good, it was just better than his E lude's

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C - rocka. did you set up the battle wit' me?

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naww phayme not yet...........uppin this.............................................. .................................................. ..................

c rocka easily took this battle, better punches mroe creative lines, elaveted vocab more indepth open and finisher...over all he merked the other kid...vote Crocka...and yo can you hit up the battle in mt sig wit an honest vote thanks

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The Weathers Art
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=108673
My Teenage Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=104850
Secluded
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...851#post1148851
Open Your Eyes
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...461#post1157461

yep yep sure thing...............................one more vote.............................................. .................................................. ........

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