battle now...
6-8 lines...
no bullshit

u mudafukin emcee...
wat r u going to do against me?
wat'r ur age again? 15???
fuk it, i'm battling a kid!
I'm gonna spit rhymes to ur chest...
I think u betta start using a bullet vest!
oh, ima give u an advice then and end this shit anyway...
u dont fukin wanna get me mad, again, don't get in ma way!

man, ur taking too much long..c'mon, mine was quick...oooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

you cliam your droppin thunda_rhymes
until lightning struck and hit mine

now take your time
your 'bout to experience an ill ryhme

your battilin' an intellektual
my rhymes are so ill there gonna leave you ineffectual

when iam through your gonna be disfunctional
so bad your gonna relize that your a homosexual

alright lets get some votes <<<<<<<<<<>>>>>>>
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my vote is intellekt...he had better wordplay and his verse was setup better...thunda...your shit was just too basic....you used predictable lines...no beef...just my opinion

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i'd be down to battle one of you after your shit is finished getting voted on...holla back if your down

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Alright, you both are still elevating. Just think of this match as a preview i guess. Would be wack if you weren't both new. Have to give it to Intellekt but also gotta warn him not to put too much filler in the verse and to ALWAYS stay at his opponents throat, every word if possible. Don't take whole bars to talk about how you're here. We know you're here, now it's time to battle.

As for the other cat, Thunda_Rhymes. Try to use less predicitable rhymes, go to The Wackness Emergency Center and read some tutorials about structure and punches. Actually, i'd give that advice to both of you.

Peace

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tobacco pipe smoker
escobar, your life is over
justify the righteous nova
bullets flew out his right shoulder

your battilin' an intellektual
my rhymes are so ill there gonna leave you ineffectual

haha i loved it
vote-intellekt

reasons-duh!!

k thz ,i'll try to work on ma rhymes............................................ .................................................. .................................................. ......

My vote - Intellekt..........both need work but iNT. was a little better in terms of flow n punches......No hate but read some tutorials in W.E.C


Hit up this

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...ighlight=strict

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i know my opinon doesnt count much because i cant poll, but im reading through battles.

intellekt
you cliam your droppin thunda_rhymes
until lightning struck and hit mine
good name play

now take your time
your 'bout to experience an ill ryhme
wack[I/]

your battilin' an intellektual
my rhymes are so ill there gonna leave you ineffectual
[I]not very good

when iam through your gonna be disfunctional
so bad your gonna relize that your a homosexual
gay jokes are played


your typin like your doing an audio battle, but your doing text, just keep elevating.

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Thunda Ryhmes
u mudafukin emcee...
wat r u going to do against me?
sound like 8 mile with words missin

wat'r ur age again? 15???
fuk it, i'm battling a kid!
dont really ryhme does it

I'm gonna spit rhymes to ur chest...
I think u betta start using a bullet vest!
could of been a good punch, you spoiled it[/I

oh, ima give u an advice then and end this shit anyway...
u dont fukin wanna get me mad, again, don't get in ma way!
[i]lol, you are a herb


keep elevatin go to that WEC, and just keep elevatin homey.

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if i could vote intellekt would get it

i forgot not to put that 1st rhyme but it's ok... i don't think he owned me... but thatz ur opinion that countz............................................ ...............

my first rhyme too thanks for the advice guys ill keep elevatin
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