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Old 12-03-03, 03:31 AM   #1
wordplay
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From: ?????????
ftk_tkk VS wordplay

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your the equivelant of mute men bick..erin'/
you text is nonsense.... your computer isn't listenin/
not even poly-grip...will stop the slip/
you can try to grit...I'll just pull your jaw through your bottom lip/
leave you wallowin'...an hour or two later...death comes followin'/
hell open's up......now your fallin' in/
it's over...I sqaushed you/
you couldn't make a comeback...if a boomerang tossed you/
that means you can't win...if I lost you/
don't act thug...you ain't hard/
you couldn't be in charge.... lyrically...even if you were a mastercard/


fuck it..I'm gonna keep this verse short......

there ya go
 
Old 12-03-03, 04:27 AM   #2
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not bad, not good either.......

some good filler....but closer was shit tbh

opener was cool tho
 
Old 12-03-03, 03:53 PM   #3
wordplay
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From: ?????????
IP: 4020 66A0

thanks for the imput free.....now what the fucks up with this battle.?
 
Old 12-03-03, 07:19 PM   #4
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cchheecckk iinn

ima be back to murder you later


b watin


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Old 12-03-03, 07:54 PM   #5
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yo i was plannin on burying you but your already underground...
I'll as fuck with Hiv infection spittin it the only thing you got goin around...

One nut short of a win this wordplay cant rhyme if "rhymes" hit this gay...
With wack rhymes and a profile to match nether aint nuth much to say....

My lines will make you cry make you die twice before you hit the stage floor...
come back again and slam you like your daddy did in 10th grade call your mom a whore...

Please believe im takin easy on this bitch mad fag the reson is i'll have my niggas run you down...
this RB turned into a circus cus in my eyes all i see is a muthafuckin broken down clown...
 
Old 12-03-03, 07:56 PM   #6
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i'll have to vote on this battle in a few minutes..............i almost have enough posts to poll vote......fuckin finally........
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