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~©Ã®Ñåg€~ 5 100.00%
Angry~Cracka 0 0%
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Old 12-04-03, 06:42 PM   #1
Angry~Cracka
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Angry~Cracka v. ~©Ã®Ñåg€~

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aight 6 lines, due 10 min from your check in
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Old 12-04-03, 06:52 PM   #2
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Checkity Check............................................. .................................................. ............
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Old 12-04-03, 06:53 PM   #3
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aight due by 12:03, lets do this
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Old 12-04-03, 07:05 PM   #4
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DING DING!!!!.....


CarNage bout ta hand lyrical bruizingz, an' get under ur skin like blood "tranzfusionz"/
1-1..rec AngryCraka only excelz at losen', u'll get hit wit tha mic till ur left wit evalastin' "contusionz"/

Don't worry kid I'll give the word to yah "Momma" about how u died from this verbal heat "TRAUMA"/
leave your faggot ass "6 FEET DEEP" like that "HBO DRAMA"/

fINISHER

Your bleed’n like a virgin, hurten, gettin penetrated for the "first-time"/
Ya best is my worse-rhyme, I’m spitt’n sciptures with a "cursed-mind"//

U the Weakest Link goodBye....lol
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Old 12-04-03, 07:05 PM   #5
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WAITIN FOR CRACKA......dONT TAKE TOO LONG CUZ I DID IT ON TIME.............................................. .................................................. .........
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Old 12-04-03, 07:09 PM   #6
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fuckin telephone modem kicked me off, wtf....

Hold up, yeah kid, you know I can bust ya open/
Let the bitch post first so he cant say his fingers broken/
You must be a speed bag cuz I'm always landing punches/
My lines cut up ya stomach more than doing crunches/
Only time he got some, just put his hand in his pocket/
Just quit RB now, fool, cuz ya know that ya just lost-it/
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Old 12-04-03, 07:10 PM   #7
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AIGHT NICE VERSE VOTE PEEPZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZZ ZZZZZZZZZZZZ
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Old 12-04-03, 07:11 PM   #8
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^^ yeah yours is decent too, mines aight i guess...hungover as hell right now. lets get some good votes in on this shit ya'll..........
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Old 12-04-03, 07:26 PM   #9
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Wus up wit peepz not votin on battlez Man............................................... .................................................. ................UPPUNNNNNNNNNNNNNNN
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Old 12-04-03, 08:11 PM   #10
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uppin for votes................you voting on other peeps' battles too carnage?....................................
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Old 12-04-03, 09:28 PM   #11
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flow: Angry~Cracka
punches: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
structure: Angry~Cracka
creativity: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
metas: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
enjoyment: ~©Ã®Ñåg€~

was anaight battle

peace
 
Old 12-06-03, 01:16 PM   #12
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uppin for votes............................................. .................................................. ..........................
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Old 12-06-03, 01:22 PM   #13
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my vote is exactly the same as Rap~Jesus~. Crack had flow and stucture. but ~©Ã®Ñåg€~ had everything else.
my vote. ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
keep elevatin.
 
Old 12-06-03, 01:41 PM   #14
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Carnage:

CarNage bout ta hand lyrical bruizingz, an' get under ur skin like blood "tranzfusionz"/ (<nice punch)
1-1..rec AngryCraka only excelz at losen', u'll get hit wit tha mic till ur left wit evalastin' "contusionz"/
^coulda refined this, made a "sharper" point, but good line

Don't worry kid I'll give the word to yah "Momma" about how u died from this verbal heat "TRAUMA"/
leave your faggot ass "6 FEET DEEP" like that "HBO DRAMA"/
^Structure suffered here, but decent line.

fINISHER

Your bleed’n like a virgin, hurten, gettin penetrated for the "first-time"/ (<nice- good meta)
Ya best is my worse-rhyme, I’m spitt’n sciptures with a "cursed-mind"//
^Strong closer. Nice verse.

Angry Cracka:

fuckin telephone modem kicked me off, wtf....
^ This was ya best line...lol j/k

Hold up, yeah kid, you know I can bust ya open/
Let the bitch post first so he cant say his fingers broken/
^ lotta filler, no REAL punches tho.

You must be a speed bag cuz I'm always landing punches/
My lines cut up ya stomach more than doing crunches/
^good bar-decent snaps

Only time he got some, just put his hand in his pocket/
Just quit RB now, fool, cuz ya know that ya just lost-it/
^strong first closer line, but the last one lacked the punch needed to take it.

Breakdown:
Open: Car
Close: Car
Meta's: Car
Creativity: Car
Flow: Angry

Vote: Carnage
 
Old 12-06-03, 01:43 PM   #15
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Here's tha active links: fa REAL, Return tha realness, come poll an honest vote, cuz YOU KNOW how fucked it is to have ya shit SLEPT on:

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96175

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95464
 
 


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