8 lines
30 mins

check in then spit first

mic check.....1.....2..............you fucking dead.

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a defective emcee gonna end up knee deep
cuz im bout to make this 0-3 geek bleed
i RAID on you...your win will never exist
cuz whats this piss-ANT to do when i SPRAY spits like POISON MIST
like bitin style off tyson... im just knockin you out dude
cuz your AVATAR isnt the only thing HERBish about you
im not jokin...this isnt a fucking laughing matter
u dont need to CRACK a smile...your face has already been SHATTERED


explanation: RAID is poison ant spray if u didnt know that.




drop your verse kid.....

lets get some votes in here please. i know i cant vote back yet but just do a good deed. we've all been here before.

yo i wrote myn right now so whenever u drop i will drop right after............................................. .................................................. ..................................

mic check 1...2 thats all u can do,
before we even start i can tell ur thru.
You say that your Phoeniix well im Arizona,
last time i fuckin checked, i fuckin own ya.
Phoeniix was a bird that was coverd by fire,
the only thing u coverd wit is the stench of a cryer.
Before u steped to me u should have coped some skill,
cuz now laughing dividing up your broke ass will.

*Phoeniix-mythical bird covered in fire. also city in Arizona.

last line i missed a word.

cuz now ur family's laughing dividing up ur broke ass will.

my bad.
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uppin...1..

..PS THE DORK CHANGED HIS AVATAR SO MY PERSONAL DIDNT WORK.....HE HAD "FUCK MILK GET POT" ONE WITH THE WEED LEAF. YEAH....


LETS GET SOME VOTES

i say that E-lude took this with the personals on pheonix name
he had a good opener n closer n i liked his flow n structure
my VOte=E-Lude

by da way yo please drop a vote on the links in my sig were gettin slept on yo thanks alot peace___________________

dude u got ripped phoneix no hate just a honest vote i felt e-lude much better on his flows! anyhow good job to both of ayll


vote erased . -feeble

???what u want me to say i just said good flow and He got ripped Dude listen man u beat him by ur flow style and it was in order more Not a lot of punches but more complex

oops wrong post lol lololollllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllllll lllllllllllll jesus i feel dumb______________________________________________ _________________

breakdown:

flow-phoenix
personals-elude
punches-phoenix
structure: phoenix
complexity: neither
vocab: neither
enjoyabilityhoenix
votehoenix

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Wins
Realest~Rap(5-0)
3%(5-0)
inkwell(5-0)
eminem minis(5-3)
lyrical extasy(5-0)
whiteRwrong(5-0)

flow-elude
personals-elude
punches-elude
structure: elude
complexity: neither
vocab: neither
enjoyability: elude
vote: elude

Overall, i just enjoyed Eludes more, I liked his disses much more.

"You say that your Phoeniix well im Arizona,
last time i fuckin checked, i fuckin own ya."

Dat was the killer rite der, good battle.

My vote - E-lude

Return the favour with votes plz
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