lets do the damn thing

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good luck pz

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depriving Monoxide of oxygen...Choking this chump till he's Pale
...sqeezing him so hard my Punches make him Fail to Exhail
Inhale..quick fire blows that Burns out Monoxide to Ash N Dust
...while I'm in full flow Merking..Dick Heads still shaking off Rust
why Must...I waist little thoughts on you instead of Sleeping
...and you offer me your Hottest lines so its your ass I'm Reaping
but I'm Keeping..Mine..coz like Fine Wine I mature w/ Age...
..your jus another Gimp in a Chapter which i sley Page by Page
see schools out...but like a Perv' Teacher,i raped you in Detention
...coz I see in your eyes that you Strive for a Little RB Attention
not to Mention..that you Drownin like Flidimied Swimmers...
..only hot thang outta ya Mouth is Rancid Shelter home Dinners
"And the Winner"...is the guy Detained..wasn't the Obvious...
...you're so fucked in the head that your brittle Minds Oblivious

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Looks at the crowd and say’s wow this should be quick

You should know...battlin' me like askin' the devil for a deathwish,...I hold you soul and style in my palm
Instead of death...I grant you something more fittin' for you...i submit your horrific face to uglypeople.com!
you surviving this battle, i'd call that a fucking narrow escape
you wouldn't hit a sick punch if convicted of abusive rape
I've got more "surprises" in this package than children’s cereal.
You can't know what's ahead of you like a "blind man" "foreseeing" a miracle...
battlin me? thats heading in the wrong direction like giving blowjobs to a broken compass
i'd say you suck but dude you blow more than hurricanes passing through trumpets
this verbal castration, will leave you 'jacked' worse then 'masturbation'...
the only time you was 'off the meter' is when you left a 'cab waiting'...~
As I put the squeeze on you like a python , I cut your "arms" off so you can't "catch" on
End your fuckin "career", and destroy the "floor" so you have nothin to "fall back on"
I'm issuing you a beating worse than the inglewood police department
your punches are as effective as keys belonging to a world trade center apartment


Drops the mic and leaves

good battle man that was tight lets get some honest votes in here
but godd battle man
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Punches=both Mostly Monoxide
FlowStructure=B.I
Enjoyment mostly=B.I
Complex=B.I
personals=B.I

Overall B.I

Good battle i seen both but liked b.i a little more my favorite senteces from both.......

B.I sentence i liked=
"...coz I see in your eyes that you Strive for a Little RB Attention
not to Mention..that you Drownin like Flidimied Swimmers...
..only hot thang outta ya Mouth is Rancid Shelter home Dinners"


Monoxide=
"As I put the squeeze on you like a python , I cut your "arms" off so you can't "catch" on
End your fuckin "career", and destroy the "floor" so you have nothin to "fall back on"

but that python part i heard from somewhere i jsut dont remember so yeah i think it was KJ52 on his album.....
Im like a python....ill cut your oxygen off....

personal-b.i
flow-b.i
punches-b.i
opener-b.i
closer-monoxide
entertainment-b.i

vote-b.i

please vote on my battle, honest votes needed

~peace~

opener:BI
closer:Monoxide
punches:BI
structure:B.I
vocab:Tie
wordplay:Tie
overall:B.I

aiight, nice battle peeps, plz hit up the battle in my sig

aiight

peace

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Opener- Monoxide
Dat uglypeople.com line hurt, dun care wat anybody says, dat had me laughin off my seat

Closer- Monoxide
I felt his was atleast stronger than B.I's.

Punches- kinda a tie...Monoxides were funnier tho

Entertainment- Monoxide

I dont wanna sound like imma dick rider but I just Monoxide's post was better, and it had me laughin like hell so...

Vote- Monoxide

I'll vote when i hit 100 posts.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=96491

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97040

Return the favour by voting on those 2 battles plz, thx.

lol^^^^to that
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opener:BI
closer:Monoxide
punches:BI
structure:B.I
vocab:Tie
wordplay:B.I

<b>overall:B.I</b>


ite gd verse B.I, work on your punches tho they were ite but could hit harder with more personals.

plz repay the favor with an honest vote on this


http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...8793#post968793


...........thx...............pz