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UnParalled 0 0%
B.I.Detained 5 100.00%
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Old 12-07-03, 07:14 PM   #1
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B.I.Detained Vs UnParalled

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10 lines max
no feedin etc
blind spit
30 mins to spit
good luck
exlained votes only count pz
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Old 12-07-03, 07:29 PM   #2
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checkin in...
waiting for you to check in
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Old 12-07-03, 07:34 PM   #3
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Old 12-07-03, 07:46 PM   #4
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1st off...how you gonna take 20 mins to Check in your Existence
...N 2nd...how du expect to live w/ a Paper thin Resistance??
coz shit I Knock you down like Drunkerds to Destined Roadkill
...instead of keyin a 10 line Verse...start Keyin down a new Will
this Chump is askin for a vote on a Battle but leaves a faulty Link
...lmao..Tends to do everythin else..but the main thing..THINK
I take all but the Kitchen Sink..fuck it I'll take that off you too
...see we are Un-Parall-elled..I'm light years aheah of You
I keep looking back at you but all I see is a Dark N Bland Spot
...but like Baked Cooking Apples...your Core is about to Rot
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Old 12-07-03, 08:13 PM   #5
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My lyrics hit like cobra Venom,so it's Safe to say...my spits' is Killin'-em'.
Yea,I read yur' verse,it's nothing but a Waste of Words,like the 100 char. post minimum.
You not nice,I'll Expose this Pussy tonight,just to Show his Bitch-Side in this Fight.
Easy to see that yur' lyrics r' doo-doo,it's no wonder your Content with the Shitty thangs in life.
You not tight,So coming Half-Done,is the only time you stay in your Prime.
Your not ahead of your time,Claim your sweet,but 2-0 Behind,in Elite Front Lines.
I'll slice off yur' Writing Hand,just to Deprieve this guy of his Rights.
He Registered a month later then me and already has double my posts....where would you be without this site?
Yur' hits r' weak,I'll give yur' mind a Shrink,there's no way you Thinkin' Big.
I"m killing this kid,Talk is Cheap,so your lyrics are Poor,it's quite relevant why your reppin' Peasantry in your Sig.

.......Uppin'
 
Old 12-07-03, 08:33 PM   #6
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Old 12-07-03, 08:48 PM   #7
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if i were able to poll vote i would vote for Unparalled..he had some nice personals along with wordplay and metas.. pucnches were ok...B.I.. u also did pretty good but you verse just wasnt enough for Unparalled..no-hate..but good try.. keep it up both of you..nice battle..props to both..
 
Old 12-08-03, 01:51 PM   #8
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Old 12-08-03, 02:10 PM   #9
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Personals- Un
Punches- Un
Flow- BID
Multis- Tie
Vocab- Tie
Wordplay- Un
Overall- Un

Synapsis- Unpara just had an overall better verse... He hit hard wit personals... and that really help'd him win it...
 
Old 12-08-03, 02:16 PM   #10
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^again, this cat says "synapsis..."...damn...BI took this junk with no problem...unparalled didn't have anything on him....flow was on top and so were the punches...vote - BI..hit this battle up ya'll

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97161
 
Old 12-08-03, 02:28 PM   #11
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yo i felt both verses but i felt bI verse more. his punches wuz hittin harder but un punches wuz hittin just kinda weak.....un u got good ideas just tweek em a lil bit and elevate....no hate

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Old 12-08-03, 05:12 PM   #12
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Old 12-08-03, 05:18 PM   #13
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B.I. had that level of professionalism that I enjoy when reading text. I hate stretched lines, to me that means you can't come tight with such strict structure, and I like the personals that UN had going but I take skill over laughs any day.
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Old 12-08-03, 06:09 PM   #14
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Old 12-08-03, 06:14 PM   #15
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though bi beat me in the past (yet my style is differnt now) i still vote for him his shit beat this due by far! this shit was ripped easily and im lauphign about it ! gj B.I u got my vote!
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