Aight you know the laydown:
Check in within 10 mins
Spit within 20 mins
Minimum 10 lines
No Crew
No hate
No d/r
No Alias
No shit like that

Peace!

check in................................................ .................................................. ....................

shit who'z goin first????????????????????????????? >>>>>>>>>>>............................................

McProfit .. u make other people profit for giving them wins
your easily merked, knocked down, in bowling i just knocked down all ya pins
your crew is reality.. Outfits a.k.a Outfitz outta ThriftShops
with a record of 0-4 ur a fugative running from the Emcee Cops
(When In Battles)"You studder even when u type on the net"
even when u get more wins and posts no one will consider you a "vet"
u never came close in ur battles when u bite rhymes from Nelly
all u sing to ur mom is "I'm that star up in that sky" from R. Kelly
u should quit this battle, drop the mic and leave
retire from this, with ur high voice like Alicea Keyes

Looks like iam... u have 20 minutes........................................... ..............................................

Looks like iam... u have 20 minutes........................................... ..............................................

Looks like iam... u have 20 minutes........................................... ..............................................

Aight...................checkin in................................................ ..................................

WHoa.. Sorry didnt mean the 3 posts to happen............................................ ....................

I'm gonna school you becuz I'm doin' it with heart and my lyrical mastermind too
Fool shut up need to back up before you get fucked up
I'm the best in the buisness fuck the stats I'm gonna step all over you like a floor mat
When I fuck you up Everyones gonna see that I can jump.
My lateral is 4ft high your rymes are 6 feet under I think your startin to blunder
I battle the veterans just to show them all what's it's like through the blue lense
You must be blazed to fuck cuz you really fuckin suck
It says your new to rb obviously your apparently illeterally challenged.
They call me the nigga/cracka killa with rhymes like those you might as well commit suicde because your not gonna like this ride
You scream like a bitch your like a stitch
In my side you never go away after this battle no ones gonna recognize you from today
They'll be like what the fuck is that? They'll say he got his ass wrecked by that McProfit cat.
Shit son you gonna need a gun to take me down hey hey turn that frown upside down
I guess my first win is found i'm gonna astound
those who have never seen never been
with me the straight up g cuz I am the key to victory.

Sorry I took long bro I had to take a big ass shit .................................................. ........................................

aight....here's the breakdown........gunshotz had overall better punches and flow..................profit you had some good ideas but your rhyme scheme needs to be changed up and then it will sound much better................you need to add some harder hittin punches as well and shit will be all good.....................no hatin just tryin to help out and throw some sound advice............so the overall vote goes to gunshotz...........

do me a favor and vote on this shit.....................
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97040

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yo gun had a small but really strong verse he had pounches personal(realy funny) realy good opener and a tight closer

favorite verse

your crew is reality.. Outfits a.k.a Outfitz outta ThriftShops
with a record of 0-4 ur a fugative running from the Emcee Cops

lol...that was killa...

both also had creativity and a tie in injoyment


overall vote gun

peace

i would have to say gun shots took this one he came hard with the punches and the flow wuz slick but the meta's wuz a lil 2nd grade but slick........

no hate to u mc just elevate......get to the point too much writtin

vote= gun

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