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Dez 5 100.00%
~©Ã®Ñåg€~ 0 0%
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Old 12-08-03, 08:16 PM   #1
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~©Ã®Ñåg€~ Vs Dez

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Aight

simple

rulez: 10 lines max

no crew votes
no dyckrydin

lets do this

goodluck
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Old 12-08-03, 08:29 PM   #2
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I dont know if he is gonna show in frontlinez........................................ .................................................. ................
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Old 12-08-03, 08:54 PM   #3
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checkin in... but discussing porn.


post and ill post later tonight

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Old 12-09-03, 07:27 PM   #4
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LOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOL aight here it goes

My punches alwayz hit targets…yous a bitch artist, your faggot ass flowz is harmless//
Hot Flowz'll burn this carcass....Put that gat to ur dome my bad if it dis-charges//
Like Sean Paul and 50 I'll leave this nigga "Deaded"
"Who wants to be a RAPPER" 50/50, call a friend, poll anybody.........Fuck it yah LIFE LINES ENDED//
I'll flash you the peace sign- minus the in-dex(fuck you), I send such sick text//
You fuckin suck, ur trash how u claim to be "THE TRULY BEST"//
Yeah count the "bits", punches are too hard so dont try to block the hits, "Dez" is "trash" when did the Take over begin//
Fuck bacteria CarN sick enough to reshape cancer...death shall not be tampered the Mag leave ‘More Kids Coughin Up’ than ‘Students givin fake answers//
Flows are packed like frozen lunches and if u talkin punches than CarN's a jaw bruiser.. Cause Fuckin Wit Me U'll Get ' Your Ass Shut Down For Free' Like Unknown Kazaa Users//
Your death has been setup askin me to join ur crew Warlords, shit got me fed up...cause i got 'Punches that a leave yah in Ah' longer than a 'Dentist Checkup'//
Its a known fact that CarN will murk ya............and if u travel my street of success i’ll let you off on a rode to failure//


Done deal/////////partna
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Old 12-09-03, 07:58 PM   #5
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I tear through homos.. and leave nothing but ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
Leavin him with black eyes..from just beat boxes!
Your sig? i used to rock it.. but then i turned thirteen
This kid is trying to lock me down..usin only piano keys!
Battle is a breeze..through kids Dez keeps on rippin
Im leavin this homo more confused..than Amish electricians!
Quit bitchin, ~©Ã®Ñåg€~ your verdict is in : gay
Run of the mill rapper..verses are lick rays of sunshine..
On sunny days
Kids had it.. ill let him just walk away for now..
Didnt have to try anyway..reading his verse as a root canal.
 
Old 12-09-03, 07:59 PM   #6
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*****reading his verse was as fun as a root canal




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Old 12-09-03, 08:03 PM   #7
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lmao was that swaying^^^j/p....
Breakdown----
Punches-Dez
Flow-Dez
Structure-Dez
Sustainment-Dez
Enjoyment-Dez
Overall-Dez
What a full blown merking..plz dont say he called dez out..oh well

CHECK MY BATTLE W/ BASH PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
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Old 12-09-03, 08:07 PM   #8
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vote dez

quality not quantity. although carnage out bared dez he out battled him nice verse from both but dez was more direct an nice with the punchs..
 
Old 12-09-03, 08:09 PM   #9
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punches=dez
flow=dez
meta's=dez
open=tie(both weak)
close=dez
overall= dez

dez nice spit(nuff said)

carnage u just need to step up ya game and cut out all dat bullshit in the middle get to da point da best verse is quick hard punches that make a nigga think a lil.....elevate


yo this needs some votes........thanx
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Old 12-09-03, 08:21 PM   #10
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Yea is ok............0-2 Dez........we dont have serious voterz i see...but yea nice battle indeed......uppun .................................................
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Old 12-09-03, 08:28 PM   #11
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Breakdown
Punches = Dez
Flow = Dez
Structure = Dez
Sustainment = Dez
Enjoyment = Dez
Overall = Dez

My VoTe - Dez..

Heres what took it..
Quote:
I tear through homos.. and leave nothing but ~©Ã®Ñåg€~
Leavin him with black eyes..from just beat boxes!

Nice..
 
Old 12-09-03, 08:34 PM   #12
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Carnage Got Murked....His Verse
Sucked...Dez Came Decent With
A Few Nice Puns...Carn You Need
To Get Some Structure...And Your
Punches Didn't Connect At All...Dez
Keep Up The Work Soon You'll Be
Dope Again =).

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Old 12-09-03, 09:29 PM   #13
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^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^ ^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
 
Old 12-09-03, 09:50 PM   #14
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Punches-Dez
Structure- Dez
Flow- Dez
ENJOYMENT- DEZ

vote- Dez
return the favor wit honest votes........
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Old 12-09-03, 10:34 PM   #15
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Can't poll but will help up thread: Vote Carnage

I made sure i read both verses twice to make sure i had a good feel of the flow and structure of the verses. As far as rhyme scheme and punches i felt there were a couple of misses on both, but I felt that Carnage had the better overall veres once i got his flow down. i also felt that Carnage hit mor metas even though a couple of them were obscure.
 
 


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