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Go_Todd_Go 0 0%
Meters 5 100.00%
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Old 12-10-03, 01:18 AM   #1
Meters
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Meters vs. Go_Todd_Go

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::yawn::

alright

blind spit
10-14 lines
due by tomorrow morning

good luck
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Old 12-10-03, 01:27 AM   #2
Meters
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alright, checking in. i'll post in about 30 i guess.
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Old 12-10-03, 01:29 AM   #3
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hey, im checkin in




















fsfs
 
Old 12-10-03, 01:41 AM   #4
Go_Todd_Go
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go to bed, dont let the bed bugs bite
your ryhmes are wack, cant stand the fight
it takes u 60 minutes to rhyme, who are you walter kronkyte
all you do, is sit in your room
challengin me, awaiting your doom
ill put you in your tomb zip past you... zoom zoom
blow you up like a balloon,
push u off a cliff like you was a cartoon
and all the while i be gettin major poon
fucked your mom and your dad, turns out your dads a fag
your mom be suckin his dick, while he be reading a homo mag
just give it up, yous a bust, post ur shit if you must
there really aint no reason, votin for you would be treason
 
Old 12-10-03, 02:39 AM   #5
Meters
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Have to exclaim Go Todd, Go! as you implode in menstrual flow/
But i'd resemble Vincent Van Gogh if you ever went audio/*

Devour your rhymes like a sloppy joe, because your bars aren't aligned/
Fuck being the APPLE of your eye you FRUIT, chomp ya down until you're only RIND/

Entwined in the cryptic message i'm spittin, you're motionless and fossilized/
Couldn't get a vote to lean your way if they resembled Elton John italicized/

Plagiarized your verse, think it's time to reimburse the dry nurse*/
Not having flow doesn't make you terse, bitch probably thinks he's diverse/

You are reminiscient of the day time SKY, the way your fucking rhymes BLEW/
Ironic how ya seeing STARS 'cause this emcee KNIGHT just ran ya through/


* Vincent Van Gogh cut off his ear. Get it? Can't listen to audio without ears.
* A dry nurse can't breast feed. Thus no *flow*. (btw, terse means to the point if you didn't know)
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Old 12-10-03, 12:30 PM   #6
Meters
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upping for votes........
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Old 12-10-03, 03:05 PM   #7
Meters
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Shit...haha. Any votes at all?
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Old 12-10-03, 03:11 PM   #8
B.I.Detained
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yep....not a bad battle..cudda contained harder shit tho
BREAKDOWN--
Punches-Meters
Flow-Both
Sustainment-Meters
Structure-None..tone it down lads
Metas-Meters
Enjoyment-Meters
Overall-Meters

MAKE SURE YA HIT THIS UP PLZ..BEING SLEPT ON PZ
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Old 12-10-03, 03:27 PM   #9
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yo i hit up this battle so make sure ya hit up the link above plz pz________________________________________________ __________________________________
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Old 12-10-03, 06:28 PM   #10
Meters
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upping for some votes please.....
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Old 12-10-03, 06:41 PM   #11
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good battle i think meters murked you
vocab meters
flow meters
punches meters
multis meters
wordplay meters
overall vote meters
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Old 12-10-03, 08:04 PM   #12
Meters
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back to the top for a third go...
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Old 12-10-03, 08:08 PM   #13
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Not a bad battle.......Still a bit one sided tho'....

Breakdown:

Punches:Meters
Flow:Tie....(both were a bit shaky at times)
Metaphors:Meters
Wordplay:Meters
Complexity:Meters
Multies:Meters
Overall Vote:Meters....(for obvious reasons)......

P.S.........Make sure you return the favor and vote on this battle....

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97369
 
Old 12-10-03, 08:15 PM   #14
Diverse
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battle was pretty lopsided........meters murked ya pretty bad...............his verse was full of punches, personals, good vocab and other shit........not to say that your verse was bad Todd but you gotta be less predictable and use a more advanced rhyme scheme........................keep elevatin.......

vote on this battle and the one in my sig please...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=97784
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Old 12-10-03, 09:06 PM   #15
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Have to exclaim Go Todd, Go! as you implode in menstrual flow/
But i'd resemble Vincent Van Gogh if you ever went audio/*

^^^ favorie meters line

fucked your mom and your dad, turns out your dads a fag
your mom be suckin his dick, while he be reading a homo mag

^^^ favorite go-todd line

i'm gonna give this to meters, he had better everything

vote- meters
 
 


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