you agreed to spit first with ten lines maximum. since ur not elite and therefore cant vote here, and the rule is ur supposed to vote on 2 battles before setting up a thread, i'll vote 4 times. spit ya stuff.

aight jus saw this..checkin in to make sure ya know am here...
i'll start keyin now pz................................................ ..................

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Blah keyed good luck pz...

based on Intuition...a Feeble Mind contemplates its own Fate...
..between a Rock n a Hard Place..
it decides whether to Masterbate or jus Dial-A-Date...
see this is the biggest decision this chump'll ever get to Make...
...coz like a piece of Cake...Ima eat this Vet..or should i say Fake
jus coz your a Mod..does that mean Power? ya been here a Sec'
..Cam's been here twice as long..ya gotta be bouncin sum1's Dick
see I'm presented as a Noob..but i still hold more respect than U..
...Feebs best comeback line was "At least I'm in a Crew!!"...
up a 2D Avenue...is where this chump is Going..its a Dead End...
..jus look at me as Uri Gellar and U Spoon..ur ass is Gonna Bend...

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"Woop Woop, its the sound of da police"

i laughed, released catharsis.. all at ya stoned text
how can u diss me when ur not even known yet?
I congratulate you.. your sig shows you live pleasantly...
as the first n00b dumb enough to admit net peasantry...
Detained's a dick. . who's openly content with mild sigs
& soon to be contained & slaughtered...... like wild pigs
get riled big, and go back to dickriding what 50 sings...
all we do is read ya verse, & know ur content w/ shitty things
a comedian.. go back to front lines...i love these funny midgets
cuz how can u key a verse that took over 20 minutes?

shouldnt be postin this here but feebs how do i get in elite?
holla bk pz................................................ .................................................. .............

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^ u dont deserve to be in elite...................u git merked here....................i cant vote but w/ever........

punches - feeble
flow - feeble
personals - feeble
structure - feeble
vocab/complexity - tie
metas - feeble
overall - feeble merked......

pc


vote doesnt count. -feeble

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^^^stfu u fag....how wack r you? fukin ko's in your sig...
lol go die faggot............................................ ....................
Feebs plz dont say this is a d/r

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Feeble Minded wins this one without a doubt. . B.I. had a few concepts, but worded them horrifically. I'd recommend upping the overall complexity in your writing, B.I., & taking more time on your work.

Highlights
BI: "based on Intuition...a Feeble Mind contemplates its own Fate...
..between a Rock n a Hard Place..
it decides whether to Masterbate or jus Dial-A-Date..."

FM: "a comedian.. go back to front lines...i love these funny midgets
cuz how can u key a verse that took over 20 minutes?"

V: Feeble Minded

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yea Feeble did win hands down though.
GHOD UP THERE is right. , lol. This punch
ended the whole battle for me.


vote - feeble

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The Eclipse...

Aight, here's tha breakdown:

B.I...

based on Intuition...a Feeble Mind contemplates its own Fate...
..between a Rock n a Hard Place..
it decides whether to Masterbate or jus Dial-A-Date...
^^ WEAK OPENER, OK PUNCH, 6/10
see this is the biggest decision this chump'll ever get to Make...
...coz like a piece of Cake...Ima eat this Vet..or should i say Fake
^^YO DOG.... YOU WAY BETTER THAN THAT 3/10
jus coz your a Mod..does that mean Power? ya been here a Sec'
..Cam's been here twice as long..ya gotta be bouncin sum1's Dick
^^OK PERSONAL 5/10
see I'm presented as a Noob..but i still hold more respect than U..
...Feebs best comeback line was "At least I'm in a Crew!!"...
^^^GETTING BETTER... 6/10
up a 2D Avenue...is where this chump is Going..its a Dead End...
..jus look at me as Uri Gellar and U Spoon..ur ass is Gonna Bend...
^^HORRIBLE CLOSER 4/10

TOTAL: 24/50 (48%)

AND FEEB...

i laughed, released catharsis.. all at ya stoned text
how can u diss me when ur not even known yet?
^^^WEAK OPENER... OK PUNCH 5/10
I congratulate you.. your sig shows you live pleasantly...
as the first n00b dumb enough to admit net peasantry...
^^WOO HOT TA DEF PERSONAL 8/10
Detained's a dick. . who's openly content with mild sigs
& soon to be contained & slaughtered...... like wild pigs
^^^EH.... 5/10
get riled big, and go back to dickriding what 50 sings...
all we do is read ya verse, & know ur content w/ shitty things
^^^NICE, GOOD PERSONAL 7/10
a comedian.. go back to front lines...i love these funny midgets
cuz how can u key a verse that took over 20 minutes?
^^GOOD PUNCH/PERSONAL 6/10

TOTAL: 31/50 (62%)

Vote = Feeb

no beef

i thought you had to be on the list_______________________
________________________oh well wot do i know lol//////
uppin

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i am upping this battle for the first time. . yay. . yay. . now vote fairly. . please. . we need votes. . now. . not later. . we need voters now. .

feeble took this in every catagory in my opinion. there is no question in my mind. if i could vote i would vote for

Feeble.

even though i can't vote i would appreciate it if u would drop an honest vote on this battle.its been goin on to long.


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