$RULES$
10 lines
15 mins to spit

Try to keep up, and peep this definition//
I'ma pull this weak geek up, who needs his recignition//
my first battle, and I'm the worst for nervousness//
but with his verse, and my verbs, I can swerve and miss his diss//
since it's christmas, I'ma go easy in this shit//
Claim ya Ill, but it's cuz you queezy cuz I'm sick//
I flip your verse, I prewrite only when I'm tired//
leave ya Limp like Durst, cuz tonite I'm wired//
I'll admit, I've spit much better before, but not today//
it's ok, I can weather any storm, I'm canadian.....eh!//

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Any signs of past wins should be evaporated,
…put ur head on the chop block and watch u be decapotated/1
Put chains on ya hands and feet and make u my new slave
…..burry u 20 feet deep and then piss on ya grave/2
My flows come wit forces more powerful than floods
…slice ur neck ear to ear and watch u drown in your blood/3
Im comin out wit my gat and in u I will empty my clip
…swell this kids whole face up bigger than jay-z's lip/4
The battle is officially over with the win i just gained
…leave this kid dumbfounded wit his record blood stained/5

Aiight......

Canucc:nice verse pretty good for a newb!.....keep dat shyt up kid!!......nice job!

Try to keep up, and peep this definition//
I'ma pull this weak geek up, who needs his recignition//

^ nice wordplay n punch!!

I flip your verse, I prewrite only when I'm tired//
leave ya Limp like Durst, cuz tonite I'm wired//

^ dat was aiight!!

Ok Now........

D.I:nice verse shyt was hot!!...nice flow,punch's were good!.......keep dat shyt up!!....

Any signs of past wins should be evaporated,
…put ur head on the chop block and watch u be decapotated/1
Put chains on ya hands and feet and make u my new slave
…..burry u 20 feet deep and then piss on ya grave/2
My flows come wit forces more powerful than floods
…slice ur neck ear to ear and watch u drown in your blood/3
Im comin out wit my gat and in u I will empty my clip
…swell this kids whole face up bigger than jay-z's lip/4
The battle is officially over with the win i just gained
…leave this kid dumbfounded wit his record blood stained/5

^ overall good verse!!

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good clean battle canuck had
flow punches and wordplay also vocab
over all my vote goes to canuck

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Uppin 4 votes
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uppin 4 votes quit sleepin
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upp'n
where'dm votes @?................................................ ........................................

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flow- canuck
punches- DI
multi- none..
wordplay- DI
enjoyed- Di
overall- Defining Illness

good job guys

Canuck the Daffy Duck gets my vote, he is my first child and his mother said i gotta watch after him.

Thx Dad. Thats 2-2. kep vote'n ..............................and.....quit snore'n........................................... ....................

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ncie battle peeps not really wack but overall di took it every where on this battle he came better flow betterso he takes this one so hollaz

booooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo oooooooooooooooooo

ok ....fine......I see............................3-2 fo D.I.

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this was close like fuck i dont know damn

but i gotta go with D.I.

his shit hit a little harder ya know
but Can had that nice ass punch that shit was on point i like that but that finisher was off thats what gave D.I. my vote

no hate

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