10 lines
3-0 KO
4-1 TKO
5 wins
No hate, crew or dr votes
No feeding
No recycling
Due by tonite or tommarow morning

change the deadline to tonite, checkininininininninin
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I'm going Christmas Shoppin' tonite. Try to drop when I get back, but if not it'll be up there by tommarow morning.

Easy come, easy go...lets go.

I w'rap this kid in his own name, suffacate him with his prewrite
Call you Sean Paul, I black you out, be sayin..."Jus Gimme De Light"
I take this Gift, shake it, dont sound like nothing...back to Santa
This kid cant even win a battle from his own Dome...like Atlanta
I suggest you register as another name, back you up like ya spine
John Ritter, Johnny Cash, Wrapp3d G1ft, thanks for meeting the deadline
I hand ya your first L faster than kids in they first yr. of Spanish class
And you aint ever gonna get on a Poll, like ugly girls before the cash
I easily unw'rap you like Jay-Z, and put you on the reserve list
Bring you back to Sears, return you for a mic...a real w'rapped gift

hmm ..... okay

well i guess we waiting for gift to spit



yo i also need votes so if u could try to vote here

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98464

thanx
i will post my vote for this battle after he spits

We all know your overrated, your pumped up ego, I'll deflate it
People don't just sleep on your battles they are heavily sedated
What’s the big deal. I’m goin easy, you’re on full throttle
So I’ll show this kid the ropes like bondage models
He thinks he’s hot. I’m known for makin heat stop
He’s like stealin Liquor from 7-11. i'm just Takin cheap shots
Now I'm going to a pretty place where the flowers grow
This kid can make a hot flow.only in the shower tho
skiddz from BX but u given MIC SPLITTAS a bad name
u wanna make it big u gotta gain 300 lbs like fat joe to earn fame

good battle hehre.................

breakdown-
punches - gift
personals/dissing - gift was better
flow - tie
vocab/complexity - tie
structure - ape
openoer - gift

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How he got better Personals? He used bitten lines with no Personals in his verse. Looks like you didnt read each verse.

open - ape (and gift ive heard that somewhere before i just dont know where)
flow - ape
punches - tie
struct - ape
personals - ape
complexity - tie
closing - close but ape
overall - ape
my vote - ape

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ok first of all before i even read apes post about the personal thing ape is right that kid bit lines especially the fat joe line
people use the same thing in refrenece t Big Pun if yall aint notice so wrapped should be dqed but anyway here sthe breakdown...
flow-wrapped personals-ape punches-ape(wrapped bit his)
structure-wrapped multis/metas-ape
Overall-Ape won this battle...
My VOte-Ape

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i give this to ape,bcus of,

opener,
flow,
structure(not miuch diff),
punches(some shit most good),

ape man nice spit just seemed a lil inconsistent u gota hit hasrd all the time. drop an ho

ape takes this one.......the opener was good, punches were for the most part good....structure between you guys is a tie.........ape had good personals.........wrapped didn't even really use personals and some of your lines sound like you bit them from somewhere...can remember where yet but i'll think of it..........

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