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Old 12-15-03, 04:30 AM   #1
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The Inflatable Penis With The Rubber Grip. .

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. . aka Bloody-2-Shoes vs Camarac the RB God

He's been banned before i could beat him, figured id post it and at least get some feeback:


Match me..


i wont front..
.. ive been saving dope lines for these new heads,
but im against you..
.. so this another battle.. I dont have to use them!
ur losing, why'd you even try against me rhyming?
kid, i'll punch a Hole in ya chest ..
.. big enough for damn saddam hussein to hide in!
i cant even take you serious, you get killed in bars
& left more black & blue than you got on ya avatar
& the 'no one believes in god' lines are so old that..
.. add some grey hairs & glasses, & they could be ya dad!
this is all your getting, ten lines and ya lunch meat
cause your adams Apple's..
.. big enough to feed a fucking 3rd world country!
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Old 12-15-03, 06:45 AM   #2
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the flow was knocked in places,,,,and ya punches could have been harder hitting.....i would try and add some decent wordplay and metas...other than that seemed ok.....i bit choppy but not bad......pZ......
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Old 12-15-03, 06:49 AM   #3
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Lol

Thanks for your honesty, low level boarder >=)
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Old 12-15-03, 06:53 AM   #4
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Re: The Inflatable Penis With The Rubber Grip. .

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Originally posted by God
.kid, i'll punch a Hole in ya chest ..
.. big enough for damn saddam hussein to hide in!


LoL

first saddam punch iv seen

best line

rest is average
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Old 12-15-03, 06:56 AM   #5
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^ it was keyed yesterday, but he's banned. = (
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Old 12-15-03, 12:14 PM   #6
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Re: The Inflatable Penis With The Rubber Grip. .

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Originally posted by God
losing, why'd you even try against me rhyming?
kid, i'll punch a Hole in ya chest ..
.. big enough for damn saddam hussein to hide in!

& the 'no one believes in god' lines are so old that..
.. add some grey hairs & glasses, & they could be ya dad!

this is all your getting, ten lines and ya lunch meat
cause your adams Apple's..
.. big enough to feed a fucking 3rd world country!


^^^they weren't amazing lines, ive seen u write better, but they made me laugh
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Old 12-15-03, 01:41 PM   #7
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d00d.. That shit was dope as hell

The Saddam line had me trippin..
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Old 12-15-03, 05:13 PM   #8
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sadam line was great

lmao

i was gonna use that cuz i thought i would be the first...but i saw ure battle right when you posted yesterday...so i didnt

fucker!!!!!!!!!!
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Old 12-15-03, 05:29 PM   #9
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You need to leave 3 links or 3 names of replies or this will get closed, Thanks.

But Yeah i agree this was pretty good...i liked it, The Saddam line was good, my favorite line in it...it flowed pretty good, but like Deva said it got off in a few places...but overall this was good.
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Old 12-15-03, 05:43 PM   #10
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it was pretty funny which was kool....made me laugh
you need to work on your punches....if he was wack then this was an aight verse but it wouldn't beat many vets.....
the saddam line was mad nice......flow was off at times but most of it was flowin gud

stay up playa............................................. .........peace
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Old 12-16-03, 02:06 PM   #11
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none of you have been here long enough to realise how little effort i put into this .. haha ..
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