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Good Luck ...If I get time I'll drop my verse 2day ... Peace

checkin in kool yeh ill drop after u..if u are able to drop earlt but if not definately 2moro


peace

Blah ... I'll drop right now ...

I abuse kids for fuccin' wit me ... Hang 'em 2 dry & leave 'em runnin around
Don't believe me ? Damn ... Guess U ain't been checkin' up on the ones in ur mouth
I won't juss deliver punches to this cat, I'll leave 'em beat on the floor
The John Cena of rb? Damn ... Really need I say more ?
I could practically keep goin' like this & still leave him w/ no chance of defeatin'
Fucc leaves and stems ... Ur outta luck ... It's no longer gardening season
Like amateur wrestlin' ... This kid is far from bein' a heavy weight
So I'll toss this weed to the birds ... Maybe they can help him elevate
I got this battle hands down ... Nobody's rootin' for him
Kid didn't juss wanna be an herb ... So he included the stem

There U go ... Drop 2day or 2morrow ... Don't matter ... Peace

Kid ya wack face the facts, the next big rhymer aint u,
But he is “finishing his demo”. . .if u consider burnout 2.(look@profile)
At the start I thought u may outsmart me, by what peeps had said,
But only on ya knees… IS Mentill good with his head.
Ya face has got acne, only ya crew has lost its spot it seems,
Perhaps coz ya bars suck, like beerhouses in the Fillapeans.
I detect that he wants respect, but u aint getting nun from me,
Coz kid aside from the age of ur bfriend…not all in life is three.
Me and u have shit in common, stop a sec…hold the phone,
Coz my net life is like ya sex life, the way we’re known to hold our own.

dam im rusty ...well either way thanks bro

Ok Battle On Both Sides..

Stem Had Sum Nice Lines In There...Nothing Outstanding And Still Rusty From Ya Normal Standards..

MeNTiLL Came Nice...Had Sum Good Lines In There And Punches Seemed To Be Harder Than Stems...Wordplay Was Good...But You Kinda Lost ya Flow Thru The Middle..

Vote - MeNTiLL

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opener - ment
closer - ment...nice
punches - ment
personals - ara
wordplay - tie
overall - mentill

2-0 ... But 1-0 in polls ... So uppin' for votes ... Peace

..............Blah damn I hate this 100 character thing ...

Uppin for votes ... Come on people .. Stop sleepin on battles ... And if U do vote remember to poll vote also ... Peace

Heres How It Is

Flow: Tie
PunchsL Ment
Metas: Tie
Struct: Blah...A
Multis: None
Enjoy: ment

Vote: Ment

Ment came wit some nicer punchs...neva seen A spit befo but im sure ya cud some nicer than ya did...nice battle...polled..

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=95672

hit that up witta vote..

Uppin this from bein' slept on ... Blah ... I hate this character limit shit ... Yadda Yadda Yadda ... Good ... Peace

Breakdown.

Punches - Mentill
Personals - Mentill
Flow - Stem
Multi's - Mentill
Meta's - Stem
Wordplay - Stem
Structure - Mentill
Creativity - Mentill
Overall - Mentill
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When ya can vote on my battle against tops i'm winning yaaaaaaaaaay lol its right up at the top didn't think i needed a link, if ya need the link just tell me.
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mental has no mental and wins my vote by a trail





























































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Punches - Mentill
Flow - Stem
Wordplay - Stem
Personals - Mentill
Creativity - Mentill
Multis - Mentill
Meta4s - Stem
Overall - Mentill

yo hit up my battles in my sig wit an honest vote...thanks

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