....can't believe u want ur second loss already...lol

20 lines max
both verses are due by 2 AM eastern time
no recycling or biting
no dickryde/hate/crew/fan votes
no quotes, caps, bolding, or underlining (single quotes are ok)
any breaking of rules is auto DQ

peace
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^^oh and that means Dec. 16 2 AM eastern time...i'ma be out for the rest of the day........................

peace
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the fuckin Prick, ebs waits foe this wussies verse
constant talkin of shit proves hes still pussy hurt
personal punches? hes shook silently hopein DQ
ebs scared? who bitched slapped who 4 round 2
front tuff on the internet because kids clown you
when computers off your textl has a doubtin veiw
if your rap battles best? simply prove it, flow-audio
ya dick ryders in text still approved my cocky-flow
evil wont be nice, my last verse lost only to slumber
against SJ prewrite his name and day is numbered
professional, be my claim i show up post no notes
intellectuals, see thy name show up dont show votes
no profits ya barz jackpot isnt that of triple sevens
the ho Prophet pars ass soft, Sj tipp pulls heads in
evil bombs Sj's bum hope only his sig's pic is cutthroat
like a gram of salt his text a product of bunk dope
you follow this evil around like your spirtal master
no allegations, rydin for votes spoke lyrical diaster
searchin old threads n talkin ish tittles SJ's source
whos sonned? this kids sidelined without divorce

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the one that watches the watchmen:

1 post are rules of time limits
2nd posts are changin the rules
your online after my verse was written
lose any excusess you have and just spit

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the one that watches the watchmen:

i didn't change the rule u dumb fuck...lol...i replied back telling u the correct date that was supposed to be in the original rules....i'll be dropping soon

peace
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blah @ u...u only deserve 16...good enough...

What An Herb, Gave Ya Ur 1st Loss Now He Already Wants His 2nd Merk..
Idiotic, Kid Tried Postin His Verse In A Battle Between Me And Emerge..
Nobody Understandin Ur Punches, U Got Me Thinkin Where U Got That??
I Told U I Set Up This Thread And U Replied Back Wonderin Where Am I At??
Judgin By How U Reply To Me, I Gotta Say Ur Mind Is Ur Location..
Like 'Fishin With Limited Food Supplies', I Give This Kid A 'Cast-Ration'..
I Slaughtered U Last Time By KO, And U Still Feelin The Same Fate..
Fuck I Just Beat U In Round 1 Today, Kids' Just Diggin A Deeper Grave..
Stuck In My Lyrical Holocaust, There Ain't No Savin This Jew..
Ur Life's A Secret That I'll Expose, Cuz The Pic In The AV Is U..
Fuck I Done Beat U Already I Don't Know Y I Gotta Go To 20..
Get Rid Of This Scary Movie, But This Pussy's Gone Crazy Like Sydney..
Hate To Say, Even Ur Voting Rings Are To Scared To Vote Against Me..
I'm The Swordsman, But He's Hoppin Chainlinks Thinkin He's Fencing..
How Can U Spit Clean When Ur Teeth Have A Shit Gleam??
I'm Done Like R.Kelly Orgies I'll End This Battle At Six-Teen..

peace
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[B][COLOR=orange] OOOHHH not to bad of a batttle actually but
SJ666 go this in every single catorgory man jus

Shit i fucked up on meh vote hold on


OOOHHH not to bad of a batttle actually but
SJ666 go this in every single catorgory man jus better overall that last line was very good by sj666
How Can U Spit Clean When Ur Teeth Have A Shit Gleam??
I'm Done Like R.Kelly Orgies I'll End This Battle At Six-Teen..
^lmao but good battle Ebs Come harder than that kid you got sum potentiol jus elavate sum

opener: smoka
closer: smoka
punches: smoka
structure: Tie
vocab: smoka
wordplay: Tie
overall: smoka

aiight nice battle,
smoka is too good for you evil, you need to battle some other peeps before you continue to up smoka win record like battle threads.

aiight
no hate
peace
PLZ HIT UP THIS WITH AN HONEST VOTE, AS I HAVE TOOK THE TIME TO DO SO IN YOURS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98908

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damnit...u forgot to poll vote....lmao.....i hate it when that shit happens.....hopefully he will see my reply...

peace
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^^oh...that was to Kclipz....iono if double 0 poll voted yet....but apprecite the votes people.....

peace
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wow...both u bastards forgot to poll vote...lol....well....would be 2-0....uppin #1 though........................

peace
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*sorry for the freepost*
i just polled my vote lol............................................... .................................................. .............

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My vote goes to sj666
I liked your flow and I liked your structure and metaphors but I think this battle was gonna be 1 sided anyways. It's ok take it as constructive critisism. But for a flyweight you did a damn good job. I liked your vocab and structure betta.

Vote:smokajoka666