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View Poll Results: Who won this battle?
...::ËMËRGË::... 3 37.50%
SmokaJoka666 5 62.50%
Voters: 8. You may not vote on this poll

 
 
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Old 12-15-03, 10:47 PM   #1
SmokaJoka.
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SmokaJoka666 vs. ...::ËMËRGË::...

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10 lines max
no dickryde/hate/crew/fan votes (that means crews u are trying out for..lol)
no recycling or biting
both verses are due 1 hour after both emcees check in
if u post late u are DQed
no playing off of verses
any breaking of rules is auto DQ

peace
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Old 12-15-03, 10:52 PM   #2
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checkin in................................................ .................

peace
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Old 12-15-03, 11:04 PM   #3
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check in................................................ ....................................
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Old 12-16-03, 12:03 AM   #4
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Fuck smoka I’ll take a leak on this jester…just to see joka get pissed!
A modern Socrates cuz you’ll be appreciated…when you cease to exist
Searching deep for personals to make up for the fact that you can’t shine*
An herbivore defined…you aint shit & proven it…the last seven times!*
You reppin 666 screaming for Satan to help as I’m tearing you by layers
Swayer! gave up on God cuz he hates you & never answered ya prayers
Your punches hit me obliquely like screws being hammered instead of drilled
Why am I battling this bitch who bootlegged his avvy from Born to Kill!?
Feed off verses swear that every line is dope imposing on people to vote*
Yeah you are a joke as well as insane…to be thinking you have any hope


* last seven battles have been with newbies
* always searches deep for personals
* always starts his verses with "if you don't understand my punches and blah blah then dont vote everyline has it"


goodluck smoka
 
Old 12-16-03, 12:18 AM   #5
SmokaJoka.
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Warm-Updoesn't count as lines....no direct hits)
Kid Cuts 'Light Switches In Half' And Thought He Had A 'Sawed Off'..
What Are U Thinkin?, U Know U'll Catch An 'L' Like 'Alphabetic Dodge Ball'..

Apocalypse:
Just Lookin For Dirt On U, I Concluded U Voted On All Of Eye Que's Battles..
U Told Realist U Love Him And Asked Dez For Head, Hop Off The Saddle..*
On Stage Without A Crowd, A Flaming Queer With The Closet As His Hide Out..
U Should'a Took The Straight Route, Now I Know Y ROA Ignored His Tryout..
I'm Sorry But U Lost To Flyassbitch, After This U'll Take Punches Severely..
Just Look At The Bottom Of This Page It Said Ur Equilavent To 57 Queers-E..
The Best Win U Got Is Phil.M.Up, But U Thought His Middle Initial Meant Men..
Feelin Tension? Try To Stay With A Large Crowd But U'll Never Blend In..
Ur Votin Is Some Shady Shit, Cuz Ur Slapped In Circles Within My Radius..
Supposedly I'm Known As An Herb Killa Kid U Shoulda Stuck With Ur Alias..**

* - Always On A Mods Dick In Emcee Interaction...lmao
** - If Any Didn't Know His Alias Is Herbal

peace
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Old 12-16-03, 12:21 AM   #6
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great battle, but smoka takes this shit with clean, flat out punches......nice shit.............good verses by both, but rhyme scheme was on top with smoka......just feeln his verse more than other dood's...no hate here...vote-smoka...hit this battle up with an honest vote you two..thanks

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99123
 
Old 12-16-03, 12:22 AM   #7
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its a pretty close one, but id give it to smoka, nice rhymmes, and a good flow to it too, good battle but id give it to him
 
Old 12-16-03, 12:38 AM   #8
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Ya'll Are Two Idiots Who Dont Know How To Vote^^

Breakdown:
Punches-Smoka
Flow-Tie
Personals-Def Smoka
Metas-Smoka
Wordplay-Smoka
Enjoyment-Smoka
Opener-Smoka
Closer-Smoka

Pretty Much Only Thing In Comparison Is There Flow Nothin Else. Smoka Str8 Killed This Kid Wit Personals And Just About Everything Else. Pretty One Sided Battle

Vote-SmokaJoka666
 
Old 12-16-03, 12:50 AM   #9
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^^i don't think T Rex polled....thank god that herb didn't....that was the shittiest way to get 100 posts i've ever witnessed....good battle Emerge....i already told u u came better than i thought u would...

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Old 12-16-03, 02:29 AM   #10
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Ahhhh, to be honest i saw this battle a little differently. In my mind victory goes to Emerge. SmokaJoka666 is fucking insane with how clear and hard his punches hit but there was a complexity in Emerges verse that kind of was a bit more subtle in picking Joka apart to me, more methodical. So in what i read as basically an even battle with Joka winning on Punches Emerge still edges it out because of complexity. A prime example would be Joka's first line where he just kind of lists a bunch of disses on Emerge. Tight shit man, tight that you dug it up but i would have appreciated if it would have been integrated into the verse in a more clever and not so blatant "this is a personal" kind of way. That being said, you both are tight and could most likely murk me easily.

Vote- Emerge

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Old 12-16-03, 02:55 AM   #11
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hmmmm...........very nice......


opener+1-E
closer+1-Smoka
punches+2-E.....this was very close...smoka coulda had this..but the philmup line and the flyassbithc line took from his consistency
personals+2-E...both had nice personals...but E's were more effective....i couldnt peep smoka's sig but i knew what they were about...
wordplay+1-tie
multis+1-E
originality+1-E
complexity+1-E......made his personals with more complexity
cornyness-2-neither
enjoyment+1-E

favorite lines:

Emerge:
"Your punches hit me obliquely like screws being hammered instead of drilled
Why am I battling this bitch who bootlegged his avvy from Born to Kill!?".....lmao...nice shit

Smoka:
"Ur Votin Is Some Shady Shit, Cuz Ur Slapped In Circles Within My Radius..
Supposedly I'm Known As An Herb Killa Kid U Shoulda Stuck With Ur Alias..**".....nice s/n diss....

using my point system will seem like this was a merking...but thats not the case....E edged it out on punches, personals, ..which are worth 2 points...no hate intended by this both...but honesty is the best policy..

overall ....SmokaJoka666 (+2)....Emerge (+10).........no hate...but my breakdown will now include a couple more categories for next time...late
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Old 12-16-03, 07:28 AM   #12
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smoka wins this battle.....
Punches and flow were better
than Emerge's and I liked both verses..
Overall tho....Smoka wins marginally

Emerge...Ya didn't poll vote on my battle

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...15&pagenumber=2
 
Old 12-16-03, 08:25 AM   #13
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ERM......THIS IS A REAL CLOSE CALL. I REKON I'M'A GIVE IT TO SMOKKA THO. JUST BECAUSE HE REALLY HAS LOOKED AT EMERGE AND BROUGHT OUT HIS SHIT.
CLEVER.

PEACE OUT.
 
Old 12-16-03, 09:21 AM   #14
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Imma vote on this since i kno how newb votes can b : /

Flow: Tie
Punchs: E
Metas: Tie
Structure: E
Personal: Tie
Enjoy: E

First read i thought Smoka had this...but i read thru again n emerge got this with his punchs...punchs win battles...smoka was close but emerge gets my vote

smoka was good..emerge was tht lil bit better

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=98986

hit that up please..im pissed off @ newb votes

n the agents aint really a crew its justa bunch of us tht spit open mic diss's so dont count this as a crew vote

word up
 
Old 12-16-03, 11:55 AM   #15
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aight coo...appreciate honest votes....uppin #1 or 2...whichever...lol............................... .

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