10-12 lines
20 minutes
blindspit...
no crew/hate/d/r
check in

After 9 months SlimDawg is back/
TheUnderrated is the first bitch i attack/
You all talkin, like you a pro but we both rookies/
BUt im bout to crakc open your head like a fuckin fortune cookie/
Beware I aint got a crew so im packin a pound, Comin to yo hood to drop you clown/
make you trade your outfit for a hospital gown/
Say u never scared well im bringin the fear/
Im the kinda thug that would bite off mike tysons ear/
I spit like this to yo gurl she let me hit it/
She askin for a kiss after we did it/
I tell tha bitch to leave /
And next time she come use a summers eve/

ehhe way to check in alright i'll key it up....
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Nicknamed slim dawg cause you got no beef..
future looks Grim dog spitting rhymes without teef...*
20 years old and thats the best fat ass for your avy?..*
Pmed me to battle with an excuse for your skills sadly*....
real Mc's spit shit quick RiP anyday..
get off of eminems dick his shit is whack anyway...*
your slim figure makes me figure you for malnutrition...
i'm on mission to flip predispition..so shut the fuck up and listen..
stumbling punches fuck you up clothesline you to dry with a crease*
no you mumbling, i'm humbling emcees were done now so cease...

*= personals y'all

explainations....he pmed with a excuse that he ain't spit it in too months..
the fat ass in his avy is cartman....no a bitch....
his name clearly dick riydes eminem....
hang with a crease is like clothes on a clothes lines....
...whatever vote/....

A'ight, weak, but herez tha breakdown...

Punches: UR
Flow: UR
Creativity: UR
Vocab: UR
Enjoyment: UR
Opener: UR
Closer: Niether

Overll: TheUnderRated

Weak, but wat can ya expect? Ya both need ta elevate in punches 'n personals...

Hit this up, plz, its beein slept on...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99213

thanx for the opinion looking for other i will elevate...all in due time till then lets get some more votes on this shit great thanx................................

both need to elevate check it slim had good flow but no real good punches, underated had bad flow, couple aight punches nothing too good though, but enough to take the win here. vote=underated

peep my battle with nookie and vote.

thanx for the loce lguys lookin to pic up a couple more votes read em and let us know what ya think...one......

UnderRated pretty much dominated this battle with punches and some nice personals....he had a better vocab....nice flow....and decent metas.....he pretty much got this battle in ever category so no need for a breakdown.....even out ur structure and tryout again aight.....

peace
4:20

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UR hit with some ok personals, he had the betta disses,
punches were soft but ok, kid need some growing

slim hit iight with his first 4lines, then he got doo doo,
disses were'nt that hittin, his flow bacame fucked up, elevate jr.

vote UR

alright sweet one more vote on this battle and we can close yet another chapter in this life of rhymes...c mon guys one more vote help me close it down...