yo imma spit first you know the rules

You Say you that you not when you actually fag/
i sqeeze you bleed so much you need a MAXI PAD!!/
you the type to get beaten' from a migit!/
and you dont drop hits..you drop shit like a pigeon!!/
im gonna get it hectic once i check this/
my hands stay around your throat like a necklace!/
i never slack keep my hand or arms/
and you dont spit rhymes..YOU SPIT CANDY BARS!!/
you do got a chance but the odds be slim/
i never slip keep a tight hold like poly grip!/

y the fuck u talkin shit lil bit/
i would say i would stick my dick in yo mouth bout it wouldnt fit/
but imma muder this fagget for just for fun in it/
ill have your mama lookin for u like they look for osoma/
but u'll be dead kinda like my mama/
know im here to rip a whole in ur ass/
u need to step the fuck back before i blast/
ill contiune to blast when the cops come kill em all then dash/
but when i come after this new be he runs liek the flash/
ill hand u the mic what u gonna do with it/
u gonna rip sike in your pants ur gonna shit/
u couldnt get a grl if u was a dike ass gay bitch/

it would be nice if we could get some votes in herre....................
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oh dear.

ok, instead of the normal breakdown, I'ma do it like this:

OC
You Say you that you not when you actually fag/
i sqeeze you bleed so much you need a MAXI PAD!!/
you the type to get beaten' from a migit!/
and you dont drop hits..you drop shit like a pigeon!!/
im gonna get it hectic once i check this/
my hands stay around your throat like a necklace!/
i never slack keep my hand or arms/
and you dont spit rhymes..YOU SPIT CANDY BARS!!/
you do got a chance but the odds be slim/
i never slip keep a tight hold like poly grip!/

ok, everything in bold type, didn't make sence and was complete garbage.

Wyte:

y the fuck u talkin shit lil bit/
i would say i would stick my dick in yo mouth bout it wouldnt fit/
but imma muder this fagget for just for fun in it/
ill have your mama lookin for u like they look for osoma/
but u'll be dead kinda like my mama/
know im here to rip a whole in ur ass/
u need to step the fuck back before i blast/
ill contiune to blast when the cops come kill em all then dash/
but when i come after this new be he runs liek the flash/
ill hand u the mic what u gonna do with it/
u gonna rip sike in your pants ur gonna shit/
u couldnt get a grl if u was a dike ass gay bitch/

everything underlined is an error. A no-no in text battles. Everything in bold was garbage.

I don't want to vote in this cuz it sucked worse than any battle I've ever read.

-NOW-

Don't think I'm being a dink, I'm just say'n yall need to ELEVATE before you rip some bullshit like this.

Vote = OC cuz he had less errors. SHITTY

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this was really a terrible battle, so no hate to either of you, but im going to vote for wyte on this one, because at least his shit ryhmed - for the most part, not really much of a flow in either one though, lotto i see this your first battle man, but wow "migit" and pigeon just dont rhyme

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opener: tie
closer: oc
punches: oc
structure: tie
vocab: tie
wordplay: oc
overall: oc

aiight, nice battle but oc takes it.


PLZ WILL YOU DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, SEEMING AS I HAVE TAKEN MY TIME TO VOTE ON YOU BATTLE, THANKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99418