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Yo this foo sphere-shit bites my lyrics like it’s a skit/
makin you slit-wrists just so you dont have to hurt when my fists-hit/
cuz you know when you do wut faggots-do my punches hit wit great magnitude/
and crack ya back-in-two,you didnt want me to post cuz you know when i attack-its-threw, all you thinkin is you bout-ta-lose/
try to make yaself a copy of this rhyme and my sentences will put a virus inside ya printer/
Lyrically I got iller lines then a medical center /
you couldnt be ill on outer space even the aliens would laugh-at-you/
they spit back-at-you hittin you wit blows that send you back to earth black-and-blue/
the only way you win is by gay-disqualifications, ill ingrave-ya-whole-face-in, send you to da hospital to get ya neck-brace-in/
ill make ya entire waist-bend, until you feet conect wit ya mouth and make you taste-shin, and then beat you again until ya heart rate-became-slim/
ill set you up against my girl Ja$per and shell rip you so hard youll begin-ta-date-men, i spit rhymes so hot for battles that i start fights even god wont engage-in/


Weak verse but i didnt need a long one
10 min verse

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Wrecka winnin a battle..nope..even ya names outa ya reach*
Ya gettin pissed on..see..its clear..like i been guzzlin bleach
Its over..you suck..this dick cant even give himself head**
Beatin me about as rare..as blondes wit no air between legs
Imma kill ya ass in slow motion..cus im maxin the payne
Museum of worst breaks..only time ya disks get in a frame
This fags so wack theyl use his spinal cord for tennis rackets
Then his videos at home..can show the pros how to wack it
To be honest..i cant be fucked..way this wins cumin so easy
Jumpin this fool..cus he called me a rat..n his styles cheezy

*Avy
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Uppin fa verse good luck .

uppin for some votes

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http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99278
Peep dis battle real quick while I break it down for ya'll ...

Thanks....

Will post a vote in a second....

Sphere. Definitly had some hard hitting punches, personals, and meta's. Verse was well written and werded nice. Flow was on da point. Best newb i've seen in a while.

Yung. Had decent punches, but just wasnt at da level dat sphere wuz. He didnt have any personals, and flow and structure wasnt great.

So. Sphere takes this one.
Sorry.

thanks

uppin

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Opener=Tie (headwrecka, why would you beat a dead guy?)
Closer = Head (yo, don't use cheezy in rap music)
Flow = Sphere (nice flow meng)
Personal = Tie
Punches= Sphere
Structure= Sphere (just easier to read)

Vote....cuz of overall points = Sphere

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yo actally i think yung won this because of better punches and struture

both were nice but i think that yung pulled thism one out

yo sphere u got alot of talent bro use it wisely

my vote-yungheadwrecka

hit this up
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99309

2-1 lets get some more votes /

opener: tie
closer: yung
punches: tie
structure: sphere
vocab: tie
wordplay: tie
overall: yung

aiight, nice battle, very competetive, but yungs opener did it for him


PLZ WILL YOU DROP AN HONEST VOTE ON THIS, SEEMING AS I HAVE TAKEN MY TIME TO VOTE ON YOU BATTLE, THANKS
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99418