alright 10-12 lines, no d/r/hate/crew....you spit first.......gl

checkin in................................................ .................................................. ..........

fritos a "corn chip", "born bitch"/
u fuckin wit da wrong "cat", u more "pussy" den "porn flicks"/
put my battles on ya shit give ya "albums some effort"/
cuz das da only wins u eva gonna "have on ya record"/,
so tell me whats da "sense in dis battle", all u "dispensin is babble"/(counts as 1 line)
nigga u bitch like a "sensitive adult"/
i got no time for ya "pety rhymes"/
from da start of dis thread fito knew dat da win was "already mine"/(1 line)
stop ya bickerin, u kno ill "bitch ya crew"/
ya names "frito", n i got more "chips den you"/
heres a warnin, i "spray clowns"/
dis battle juss proves u dont have 2 be a "frito" to "lay down"/

good luck...

DaT Nigga, fuck him, im white, but im not usually racial
But instead im gonna be polite and just give you a facial

Massengil will help Smell out your Feminen hygiene
Douche, i mean Dude, get Eminem's Kim to help wipe your pussy clean

Be like Mike, he said it dont matta if your black or white
Be like Jacko, he mustve found out your an 8 yr old whose ass it tight

Im a Frito, Dorito, Cheeto, whatever type of chip you wish to dip
AKA, Mack-10, COlt 45, will be the next clip to enter your lip

Santa said you wouldnt sit on his lap, so no Christmas for you
Hitler wishes you were around cause he liked Anal Jews

Im the salty flavor that lasts, so savor every taste of my ass
Cause you'll need a favor later, when you are a thing of the past

Dat nigga takes every category in this one. Good spit and the flow was on point. Frito i don't know where you were trying to go with your verse but you need stronger content and better punches. vote=dat nigga fav line too easy to diss his name but still i felt it.

peace

damn yal people on dis site be hagglin a lil 2 much...lets get some votes people...n i mean REALISTIC VOTEZ.....................................uppin... ..............................easy.

ok i guess u cant edit your own posts on dis site(fuckin stupid)...no offense frito but when i said REALISTIC VOTEZ i aint mean 2 talk shit, i juss dont like when niggaz vote for sum1 randomly or cuz they a dickrida cuz dat shit happened alot on da otha site i used 2 rap on...VOTE!..............uppin..........

eh, being postive pretty even / ok battle

Dat Nucca: ya came wit nonstop personals, but ya structure and the fact half of ya punches didnt connect at all. i think 1 proof read would helped ya out.
punch 2ur more pussy then 'inside of' porn flicks
^ see what i mean
Frito: must say thats a odd ball spitten name, but 2 each their own. ya had better structure more solid flow, but 8 of the 10 punches were beyond blah. after ya 1st 4 barz i almost quit readin ya verse thinkin wtf dumb just reached dumber. then i saw punch 7 and 8 and i chuckled after i read em. kinda redundent punch,


but thats all it took
vote - frito

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the one that watches the watchmen:

dat nigga took this all the way frito keep ya head up and just keep doing ya thang
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vote dat nigga, he had some decent punches, betta disses,
he spitted iight

frito was garbage, his shit was comical, thats bout it,

vote dat nicca

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DAt i didnt take it offensive, this is the first site ive seen like this, and in all honesty, its kinda gay, and i think most would be, cause anybody and anyone can vote for someone they like and there is no way that someone can really get a good verse in on anyone, i mean, you are basically going off a screen name to dis someone....anyway no offense

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none taken

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the one that watches the watchmen:

uppin for votes y ppl sleepin on dis battle!.........let my cuzin get his votes in!!..............................STOP SLEEPING!......................Thank you!

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