-10-15 lines
-No hate, crew, D/R votes
-No recycling, biting or feeding

I'll spit first since I agreed to that in BS. My verse'll be in by tomorrow morning, if not within the hour. Have yours up by 6:30 pm tomorrow, board time.

I'm in this, waiting for your check in.

yo am up for it but now its 4. 37 pm but ill drop aslong as its before 7 to 8 pm ( no longer then in withen 3 hrs * And if i forget about this pm me and ill replie * dont worry i wont bitch out no matter if i lose or not *

PEACE

I really hope you aren't ghostin'.......................................... .................................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....

This kid Pm'ed me talkin' 'bout "can I get an extension til Saturday?" I really don't think it takes 2-3 days to even come up with some pre-written shit like this kid probably is, but yeah, dukes got til Saturday morning board time or I'm takin' the ghost.

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ok am going to post now nice to see some people have no live


so yah am going to spit this is going to be reallly really bad 4 u as u will see...

Like survivor you be voted OFF am about to put dat final nail in yah COFF
but am just going to say it straight out NO ONE CARES!!
this battle isnt even FAIR ya need 2 more peeps to even brake a STARE
cuz people hear yah rapping da be like "SHUT UP OVER THIER"
fuck your so broke u and yah bf's takes use condoms and SHARE
oh your such a waste of fucking AIR you need to die same with yah PAIRS//
I watch how your eyes get DILATED when I pull da trig and leave yah ANULATED
Like assholes all yah do is spit SHIT but watch for DIS be 3 punches in just one HIT
fuck Dat be more then yah whole VERSE another win must be a CURSE
only way you be rolling is in yah HURSE I would have spit FIRST
But now yah fate be UNCHANGED leave yah face deformed and ARRANGED//
Am like mc hammer cant touch this out of yah RANGE
Yah so wack to the emergency thread its still be STRANGE//

if you dont get my punchs then dont bother voting but good battle man upping for votes

PEACE~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~`

I get your punches they are just weak ass sexual ones most of the time....You also lacked in the personals category why don't you try and hit him with some personal shit instead of just callin him gay...the breakdown..
punches- Hiku
personals- Hiku
flow- Bling- your structure is fucked up there hiku
opener-hiku..he used a personal ...you strectched your line..
closer-closer goes to Bling strong finish nice try...
overall- Hiku
Both y'all hit this up no hate one...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...888#post1000888

upping for more voting done here
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though im not really feelin the centered verse thing....highku take sthis one,

better vocab, punches....flow--better rhyming words in general

bling your punches didnt really land....and u cant just make up the word "COFF" instead of coffin just cuz it rhymes kid...
and your rhyme scheme fell off twice...wasnt feelin it

overal: high

hit this up both of u wit an honest one. its a good battle.

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&threadid=99993