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show me how yall do it up in NY ima DSGB but i got my own style that ill show yall soon ehough and for the record im not tryin to start no beaf...... Be easy

"Da Jokah" aint no "Villain"-Dont Front Son- "I'm-Ya-Hero"
I'll "Snipe" This "comic" like "DC"- Votes is mine Five-Ta-Zero~(1)
Don't like to Tattle- But It's Proven You Only Battle-Newbs
It's a Fact- Half the cats you beat have only Battled-YOU!
Ya Crew full of Ship Jumpers- But Yall ALL Loyal-To-Penis
It won't Help you win- But sure makes corn-holes Convienient
Dog you from Queens? now I see the kind of whore-You-Is
When Ja Rules wack ass already Got Signed Before-You-Did
You Try to Substitute Punchlines with "Reppin Da Hood"
You misunderstood- Ya hometown does ya record-no-good
My Styles Elegant- You Left Dead and sprawled with no evidence
Except the "Young Blood" Spread on the walls of ya tenements(2)

(1)- Joker- Villain in Batman Comics- Snipe and DC (DC Sniper)- DC is also a Comic Book Company.
(2) "Young Blood" is in his sig... I shouldn't have to explain further.

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Due date is quickly approaching and your boy didn't even post a check-in yet... whats goin on?

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aight bitch lets gooo....

ayo my flow iz Ill....and ma Intentionz are drastic//
my hallow tip bullets will fill....and turn ya whole body plastic//
have u dressed up makin a bill..next thing.. u left in a caskit//
like the iraqiez iam a kill,,u and ma bullets elope like da ball n basket//
ayo my verse isLimited Edition like dem baseball cards//
talk shit..ill have D2R crew like ma shoes and lace-yall-hard//
ayo its bottom of Sevenand iam steallin tha Third//
runnin for home base..yellin at cha pitcha flippin tha third//
aight mayne ill Tell U Why Iam Madd Son..*showin da gun*//
cuz iam pissed of at bitches like u..u a sadd one.*KNowin i wun*//
Like pac n suge..iam a stay mobed up and stay a Young Blood//
ill knock da wood..have u all robbed up..9+ya head.. i found out u got some blood//
yo u kno u aint winnin like ma bois gettin bill preventions//
and d2r aint got shit on ma bois tha Ill Intentionz//

e.z nigga wun..

meanins....
Ill...Intentionz= my crew
Limited Edition= My Crews Leader
..Botom ofSeven...stealin Third= boi iam battlin's name
Tell u Iam Madd Son= its in his sig
Young Blood= he used it against me from my sig
Ill Intentionz= once again its my crew

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uppin this mu fuckah lets goo dont sleep niggas wun.....

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vote up niggas dont sleep ill return after wun..

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dont sleep on dis nigags holla wun

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uppin this muh fuckah DONT SLEEP NIGGAS
wun

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Da Joka-You came aight had not that much multies
But mainly similies was aight and metaphores stayed basic
..but you didnt come that hard some nice complexity and vocab
and nice idea's

7/3-You came the same but your rhymes was basic ..
I five you the Complexity and thje structure botrh kindof
stayed there but you almost had it but slipped right derr on
like 4 lines

OVERALL-Both didnt come that Hard kindof weak but
overall I think Joker takes this by a lil though becuz he had a slight more

v/Da Joka

Return the favor please http://community.rapbattles.com/showthread.php?t=127309

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A'ight hot battle...uppin' this shit for ....uhh...this shit...

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lmao @ this shit.... lets get some honest votes now....upping

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hmm...

seven:"Da Jokah" aint no "Villain"-Dont Front Son- "I'm-Ya-Hero"
I'll "Snipe" This "comic" like "DC"- Votes is mine Five-Ta-Zero~(1)
^good opener..7/10
Don't like to Tattle- But It's Proven You Only Battle-Newbs
It's a Fact- Half the cats you beat have only Battled-YOU!
^nice punch...6/10
Ya Crew full of Ship Jumpers- But Yall ALL Loyal-To-Penis
It won't Help you win- But sure makes corn-holes Convienient
^eh.. bar helped your flow points, but punch wasent that hard..
Dog you from Queens? now I see the kind of whore-You-Is
When Ja Rules wack ass already Got Signed Before-You-Did
^that stuck lol....7/10
You Try to Substitute Punchlines with "Reppin Da Hood"
You misunderstood- Ya hometown does ya record-no-good
^stuck a lil bit..6/10
My Styles Elegant- You Left Dead and sprawled with no evidence
Except the "Young Blood" Spread on the walls of ya tenements(2)
^not the greatest closer...ok..wasent a punch there


jokah:ayo my flow iz Ill....and ma Intentionz are drastic//
my hallow tip bullets will fill....and turn ya whole body plastic//
^weak opener..no punch
have u dressed up makin a bill..next thing.. u left in a caskit//
like the iraqiez iam a kill,,u and ma bullets elope like da ball n basket//
^no punch..just gunplay
ayo my verse isLimited Edition like dem baseball cards//
talk shit..ill have D2R crew like ma shoes and lace-yall-hard//
^ehh....wasent feelin this
ayo its bottom of Sevenand iam steallin tha Third//
runnin for home base..yellin at cha pitcha flippin tha third//
^no punch
aight mayne ill Tell U Why Iam Madd Son..*showin da gun*//
cuz iam pissed of at bitches like u..u a sadd one.*KNowin i wun*//
^no punch
Like pac n suge..iam a stay mobed up and stay a Young Blood//
ill knock da wood..have u all robbed up..9+ya head.. i found out u got some blood//
^gunplay, but no punch
yo u kno u aint winnin like ma bois gettin bill preventions//
and d2r aint got shit on ma bois tha Ill Intentionz//
^wasent effective....would have flipped this bar..first line should have have came last...

seven:you had flow,and your ppunches were on point..
jokah:i havent seen any of your other verses,but you lack punches..you didnt hit him once forreal..and gunplay dont get you know where unless its ina tight punch..stay up

v/seven third

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