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Old 09-30-09, 02:10 AM   #1
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upfront vs fly-e

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Old 09-30-09, 02:11 AM   #2
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Old 09-30-09, 02:50 AM   #3
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before i write anything post for who the better bull is dont be on some dick ridin shit ..thank u

ok listen,
lyrically persuasive, mentally invasive, burnin niggas like you? well thats on some every day shit/
my man fly e, bout to get struck by lightning, no need for
fighting, got twins on my hips call em siamese/
chinese, asian, black, it dont matter, ill be quick to bust a clip make ya heart pitter patter, everyone on the scene run scream, scatter, aint on my level doode get a fuckin ladder/
homie i got bullets the size a baghdad, ur grl twat? prolly already had that, u lookin baller status but where ur stacks at, you a G but where ya mack at fagggattt/
fuck this dude take em out the car and slump em, broad daylight jump em, philly style pump em, leave the body like its nothin, go home and get some muffin, and then smoke a dutch cuzzin start puffin
so heres the part where i sit back and unwind, you will keep lookin up to me cuz u will forever be unsigned, ima tell u this one time, your whole verse was murdered easily by this one line.


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Old 10-01-09, 01:23 PM   #4
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Old 10-01-09, 01:36 PM   #5
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Upfront i role dis blunt so give me ya damn philly
Take ova ya whole city and smoke it wit out pitty
Ya rhymes styles shitty cant believe u tried to come at me
He is dressed up in a skirt wit lipstick gettin off to me
and who he really wants to be so he stays as close a possible
So he set up this battle just to see my name and lick a pop cicle
Upront plays wit his cunt to my pump but u wont get ova this obstacle if ya always imaginine my testicals in ya tonsals
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Old 10-01-09, 01:39 PM   #6
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honestly i liked ur verse mane but remeber if u wanted to keystyle battle u should have set that up that way this is a direct battle ur supposed to diss me not say what you would do to me considerin we would never meet. But i would be happy to keystyle u as well so u have a fair advantage if u wanna do anotha battle and just let this one be up for votes as well? good lcuk
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Old 10-01-09, 08:24 PM   #7
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iiight fammm i feeel u i just dropped some shit next time u set it uppp cuzzin good luckkk upppin
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Old 10-01-09, 09:01 PM   #8
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Checking This Battle Out Damn Upfront Spit A Book That's Crazy
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Old 10-02-09, 09:30 PM   #9
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im not going to vote im no judge but both of you couldve done better fly e the lip stick line was dope but upfront had better wordplay.
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Old 10-03-09, 03:23 PM   #10
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Yah i feel ya bra i understand good feedback bra. I just kept it a simple battle upfront did the wordplay type deal i want to battle him based off vocabulary if he sets it up that would be interesting.
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yea you got it in you dog i've read some of your stuff. keep at it.
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Old 10-05-09, 06:01 PM   #12
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Wordplay , vocab, it don't matter I'm nice at vocab set it up thanks for the feeedbackk
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Old 11-04-09, 11:36 PM   #13
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Upfront i role dis blunt so give me ya damn philly
Take ova ya whole city and smoke it wit out pitty

wow... not feeling the opener... amateurish and no punch what-so-ever

Ya rhymes styles shitty cant believe u tried to come at me
He is dressed up in a skirt wit lipstick gettin off to me

didn't rhyme... i know... some will say it's imperfect rhyming... i just say it's imperfect

and who he really wants to be so he stays as close a possible
So he set up this battle just to see my name and lick a pop cicle

NO......actually.... HELLLLLLLLLL NOOOOO!

Upront plays wit his cunt to my pump but u wont get ova this obstacle
if ya always imaginine my testicals in ya tonsals

Just a horrible closer... dude... did you even try? I wouldn't even count this as a battle verse...

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lyrically persuasive, mentally invasive, burnin niggas like you? well thats on some every day shit/

LMAO... battle done!... easily killed every line in Fly-E's verse with an opener... nice set up finish on that joint

my man fly e, bout to get struck by lightning, no need for
fighting, got twins on my hips call em siamese/

hmmm... where's the rhyme on this one? sorry, siamese doesn't cut it with lightning and fighting in my book. i know... depends on how you spit it... but this is text... so i say no-no


chinese, asian, black, it dont matter, ill be quick to bust a clip make ya heart pitter patter,

ok... nothing to grand

everyone on the scene run scream, scatter,
aint on my level doode get a fuckin ladder/

more filler... ehhh... ladder line was mediocre at best

homie i got bullets the size a baghdad, ur grl twat? prolly already had that,

LMAO... funny shyt with some sting to it

u lookin baller status but where ur stacks at, you a G but where ya mack at fagggattt/

hmmm.. filler but i like the multi's in this

fuck this dude take em out the car and slump em, broad daylight jump em, philly style pump em,

sound like some crazy beanie mac shyt...lol... like the attack but lacks originality

leave the body like its nothin, go home and get some muffin, and then smoke a dutch cuzzin start puffin

again... liked the multi's but nothing spectacular

so heres the part where i sit back and unwind, you will keep lookin up to me cuz u will forever be unsigned,

blah.... seems filler

ima tell u this one time, your whole verse was murdered easily by this one line.

you coulda put this after your opener and the battle woulda been over...lol....

good shyt...

Fly-E... props for having as many battles open that you have.... but you should work on really getting at your opponent on some real hard-core battling shyt... maybe hit up some of them fightclub type hip-hop videos and watch how them kats get it in... it's only a matter of time... i remember when i first started out... it'll come if ya keep doing it.


Upfront... try to be less generic with ya battle raps... most of those lines coulda been used on anyone and no one would know the difference... i'd like to see you get more personal... you had this hands down with ya opener and i was really looking forward to seeing what you were gonna do with it... but alas... there was some fluff in between... not weak fluff... but not anything that made me be like "oh shyt, dude is killing him!"... good shyt though... easy win
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Old 11-15-09, 12:26 PM   #14
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uppin uppin and yo ILL good feedback braaa appreciate how u actually analyze everything and dont just throw a vote up good looks stillll uppppin tho cuzzzin lets go
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Old 12-09-09, 11:23 PM   #15
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damn... i voted on this a month ago and this is the only vote?!!!! wow
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