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| Verbal Abuse |
  
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5 | 55.56% |
| Efusive |
  
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4 | 44.44% |
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10-06-04, 11:27 PM
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Verbal Abuse vs Efusive
IP: C979 A54F
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10-06-04, 11:29 PM
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IP: C979 A54F
Efusive has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 11:29 PM.
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10-06-04, 11:29 PM
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IP: 5867 FD83
Verbal Abuse has ACCEPTED this battle on 10-06-04 11:29 PM.
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10-07-04, 12:48 AM
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As Seen On T.V.
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IP: 5867 FD83
Efusive:
Enter n bruise you, defuse you n regroup you. tear pupils...face it, ya moody. Fax ya the reciept to the use of this uzi, leave ya so lame ya basically spoon me. Under these tips, hold blood in the midst. either ya wack or i must be immune. See, you were pulsless from the start, its just a matter of dusting the room. Incase of E's apathy, ill spend 10 minutes on this piece like a free tapestry. Verbs rapping happily. i earn votes cause the evidence purposely leads back to me. Whats IJL doin in RV? ya hardly decent. Reasons including ya rosters invalid. Its histerical. you alone are 15-0, ill have your dick riders tossin my salad. Link ya vocals to my shoulder. like a parrot, i dish a line and ya mimic it. Listen, ya limited. ya from rapbattles OG. ya cant stick with it, ya immigrant. Records bound. the second round of puberty has ya voice sounding a bitter whistle. I see ya avvy depicts results of this battle. thanks to DML's glitter pistol. Put ya in that cascet, its what happens when the verb is overdosed again. Either way. im scarless, regardless the fact this closure dont rhyme. LOL. |
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10-07-04, 02:12 AM
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IP: C979 A54F
Verbal Abuse is a "female" , and if you dont understand my
verse then dont vote... you singin the same song...ur weak flows in nuthin but soft ripples & i'm still pissed...cuz i said show me ur tits....& i only seen nipples I’m stacked with verses, your half ass still lacks the purpose verbal dug herself deeper but hasn’t even scratched the surface i heard ya joints crack, in fronta ya boys smacked pussy! i'll open ya chest up like i want my toys back your fighting with hope, you wanna win n you might if I choke but still your about as lethal as james bond..with his license revoked I stand to test this dude, and demand to stress what's true your verse isn't just trash.. it's garbage, junk, and the rest of you there'll be no hunt for sluts..looki here..E whored her and I'll have warm memories of her..whenever I hear the phrase cock muncher pssh!...ur not on my level trick...and the reason you made elite is cause i kept my word......when u revealed to me those asscheeks |
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10-07-04, 02:17 AM
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IP: C979 A54F
Verbal Abuse, what kind of verse what that? you barely even dissed me,
and talked to much about your self....this is a battle not open mic. blah...good luck |
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10-07-04, 02:32 AM
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: Efusive
VA-piss me the fuck off. never do that spelling on the side shit ever again. stop focusing on multis. the punches were either super weak or non existant. try to like umm diss your opponent instead of writing....that. do like way better next time........5/10 efusive- awww lawd. that was like xtra dope and shit and then i can even tell u werent trying. i like bars 1, 3 , and 5 especially. (this is the part where i tell you to elevate when ur better than me)elevate on punches dog, some wasnt stickin....i guess. good shit dawg........8/10 RTF....links in da sig. pz.
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10-07-04, 03:02 AM
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The Epitome Of Greatness
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IP: 3240 794D
Voted For: Efusive
Aiiight.... VA Ya Verse Was Nice...The Structure Was Good... Nice Wordplay And Multies...Punches Could Have Been Better, The Whole Highliting His Name And Making It Stand Out Is Played Out And Doesnt Help Your Verse In My OPinion As Does Your Last Bar Where You End Up Non Rhyming Like You Was So Sure Of Yourself That You Would Fuck Around But You Underestimated Your Opponent And Your Closer Is The Finishing Touch And You Messed It Up With That Played Out Non Rhyming Bar... Efusive..Ya Opener Was Straight You Should Bring More Fire To An Opener Though To Get The Reader Intrigued... Now The 2nd Bar Was Straight Fire And Flowed Perfectly Good W/P, 3rd Bar Was Some Funny Shit Good Metaphor About The Chest Was Feelin It... After That Point Your Verse Was Mediocre And You Could Have Put More Effort Into It...Overall I Think You Edged This One Out But Work On Your Structure And Consistency ~!1!~
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10-07-04, 04:07 AM
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Straight From Da Lab!
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IP: 7189 3E18
Voted For: Efusive
both ya verses are really stretched but I'm going for efusive for better punches, and it ain't as stretched as verbal's verse, which was stretched longer than harbour bridge.... both verses are pretty tight, but i'm just not feeling verbal's verse as much, some of her punches are just not hitting, even though she had the better structure and flow overall: voted for efusive for harder hitting punches
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10-07-04, 04:30 AM
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A Reflection Of The Past
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IP: ABE5 5A5C
Voted For: Efusive
lmao funny battle VA u had a dope vocab and all but ur punches just were not hittin...ur structure was nice as well was your flow,you also had a couple good punches in there...and u had an okay opener and closer EFUSIVE your verse had humor,i laughed throughout the whole thing rofl,dope and funny punches,and a good structure with excellent flow held your verse perty solid..although it looked like u feel off toward the end....u also had a couple of hidden personals in that verse..solid opener and a decent closer overall ima say efusive got this with an all around better verse in every category....VA ur verse was good to but ur punches didnt hit as hard as efusives did v/efusive
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10-07-04, 04:32 AM
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IP: D1F4 CDDD
Voted For: Efusive
Alright look.. No bullshit, This was close. On the one hand, we had Effusive comming with punchlines that hit pretty had.. And on the other hand we had VA comming with less hard hitting punchlines, but better rhyming skill. For the most part, this battle is even, but bottom line is, punchlines are what wins battles. More then flow, more then rhyming skill, more then multies, etc etc. A good example of what I am talking about VA is this line: Whats IJL doin in RV? ya hardly decent. Reasons including ya rosters invalid. Its histerical. you alone are 15-0, ill have your dick riders tossin my salad. Basically the lead up line is good, I dont really see how their roster is invalid but thats besides the point. The second line is where the problem is.. And thats that the punchline that is there, is really weak and doesent hit hard.. You say you are gonna have his D/R's tossing your salad.. Basically, that is a diss.. But its kind of the equivilant to a fake personal, because you have no real proof that he gets D/R and no way of getting his D/R's to toss your salad. Using lines like that are more or less useless.. They rhyme, but they really dont hit that hard.. E, this wasnt a perfect verse either. But it was enough to take the battle. Thats why you got my vote. |
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