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.-beatnuts | 1 | 16.67% | |
DeLeon | 5 | 83.33% | |
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06-07-04, 01:18 PM | #1 | |
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DeLeon .::Vs::. .-beatnuts
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10-15 lines you drop first no hate D/R or crew votes check in so i know you gonna show you got 30 mins after you check to drop you shit |
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06-07-04, 01:21 PM | #2 | |
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DeLeon Have Some Mercy On a Brotha We Kno ur Good as hell lol i got my oppinoun Vote
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06-07-04, 01:43 PM | #3 | |
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are you gonna show or what...........
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06-08-04, 10:23 AM | #4 | |
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yes, i'll spit today.'
at like uhhhhhhhh 12 or something. maybe 1.. peace 1.
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06-09-04, 08:31 AM | #5 | |
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Ch Ch Check In
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I’d grab ur verse n slice it with incisive incisions as these lyrics attack to make derisive collisions/
Envision ur body sliced in divisions…the battle just started n voters already know I’ll be the decisive decision/ I’m precise with precisions when shooting to puncture and rupture your molecular structure/ Fuck a fight…I’m the type that’ll swiftly snipe a bullet through ur windpipe at a secular juncture/ Battling me? If you were an old man growing you still couldn’t manage (man age)/ Continue arguing and I'd take your whole innocent clique out like collateral damage/ My writing can gauge n span rage to release rampage, as each page is liver then I am on a damn stage/ Battles engage…You win? That’s about as truthful as the accusation that Em didn’t scam Cage/ Del ur not popular and throwing 'paper into rotating propellers' wont get u a 'fan-page'/ ---------lol-----pause-----ok lets go............ I roll with savage factions that peruse with ravage actions to flip on any mc/ The average facts son show that ur tossing senseless disses like throwing pennies at me/ U’r better off not showing cause like ‘freestyles in the park’ I’m ‘out flowing’ u at ease/ Fuck a gun…I'll toss you 'drinks from the bar' just to have 'shots' thrown at your knees/ Watch your life growing seize the moment that my finger gives the trigger a squeeze/ My vigor keys will defeat you…and that’s easier to see then spotting a wigger in Queens/ aight get ya spit in g'luck nikka 1.
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06-09-04, 08:32 AM | #6 | |
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sorry about the structure, the area it sticks ya spit in is small,
but hopefully ya can manage reading my shit peace 1.
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06-09-04, 10:17 AM | #7 | |
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how come it took you a day and a half to drop do i smell pre-written.....
anyways since you droped late i'll drop when i feel like it.... |
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06-09-04, 10:27 AM | #8 | |
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i had finals this week
so i was studyin up but whatever man spit 1.
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06-09-04, 10:30 AM | #9 | |
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just dont take too long nigga, i dont want to play this shit out
so try to get it in by the end of today. aight? peace easy 1.
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06-09-04, 11:37 AM | #10 | |
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I'm like lions fucking cuz I always take pride when it's time to pound-cat's…// and it's not just his punches like putting "Murder Inc In A Circle" This joke is just all around-wack// you take a day and a half to spit...and you still choke.// i told you to make this a classic...dude brought me a fucken coke// ill trying to get at this kid, im a one man wrecking crew// so when it's "show time" Jamie Kennedy wont be the only one X'ing-you…// your only eating the mic...if ya wantin a snack// soundin like you got two dicks in each cheek when ya rap// Clinch my fist & punch your face so hard it'll swell to blue// And Ive seen bible hymns have a better "chants" in hell than you// This dude is wack and gets "slept on" so let me get my drop// Cuz u couldnt give a "wake up call" if u re arrange our "bed time clockz"// you'll never "Beat Dis Nuts" Cuz that just wrong// "Knock Knock" all you want but no respond cuz this "Joke is Gone"// |
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06-09-04, 11:53 AM | #11 |
GrOwN aSs MaN
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I’d grab ur verse n slice it with incisive incisions as these lyrics attack to make derisive collisions/
Envision ur body sliced in divisions…the battle just started n voters already know I’ll be the decisive decision/ ^^^ Line lenght is way too stretched...shorten your bars and focus on including words relevant to the punch only...this was filler I’m precise with precisions when shooting to puncture and rupture your molecular structure/ Fuck a fight…I’m the type that’ll swiftly snipe a bullet through ur windpipe at a secular juncture/ ^^Precise Precisions...that doesn't make sense...blah My writing can gauge n span rage to release rampage, as each page is liver then I am on a damn stage/ Battles engage…You win? That’s about as truthful as the accusation that Em didn’t scam Cage/ ^^...nice rhyming, but, where is the punch? this is filler Watch your life growing seize the moment that my finger gives the trigger a squeeze/ My vigor keys will defeat you…and that’s easier to see then spotting a wigger in Queens/ ^^ Unexciting closer...your verse was 90% filler...elevate on that dawg I'm like lions fucking cuz I always take pride when it's time to pound-cat's…// and it's not just his punches like putting "Murder Inc In A Circle" This joke is just all around-wack// ^^ Creative, if not a bit forced...again, @ least it's a punch This dude is wack and gets "slept on" so let me get my drop// Cuz u couldnt give a "wake up call" if u re arrange our "bed time clockz"// you'll never "Beat Dis Nuts" Cuz that just wrong// "Knock Knock" all you want but no respond cuz this "Joke is Gone"// ^^^^...pretty good punches there... Del..this was a standard/stock battle verse for you...solid all around...and enough to beat beatnuts Vote: Deleon...actually threw punches that hit, less filler |
06-09-04, 12:29 PM | #12 | |
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uppin for votes....
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06-09-04, 12:42 PM | #13 | |
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aight aight
i'm going to get into this multis - beat, easily his whole shit was multis, good shit vocab - again goes to beat, it was a fucking dictionary. deleon had just about everyday vocab wordplay - beat, good shit here, if you could understand it punches - deleon, he may have focused on punches, but it gets pretty boring with no flow flow - beatnuts you can vibe to that shit with all the cats multis vote/ .-beatnuts good luck both of you.
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06-10-04, 09:15 AM | #14 | |
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uppin for some votes.....
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06-10-04, 09:24 AM | #15 | |||
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Woah woah woah D got this reletavely EASY i mean no disrespect beatnuts but DeLeon came harder wit the punches personals metaphors were cool liked the coke line (no pun intended) best. I think you need to work more on your structure beatnuts coz its way too stretched and also you need to be more hardhitting but u still got time for that but good battle anyway
V/DeLeon (RTF in my sig vs Kryogenix)
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