Adam vs. Kirk

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Line limits:
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Goodluck.

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Check..... Twenty?

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Check..

I was thinking more like 2-4 lines, but I guess I'll go 20.

How bout just one?

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Heyyy, bulldog.



Nobody is savin' you from this, bro. In this bout, you're a zero,
So, I'll just split Atom in half if he prefers goin' out like a Hiro.
This fag can't detach the truth, bro and this simple fact is proof,
The only thing that Adam's known for is his history of grabbin' fruits,
And King Solo. I know you hate a 'gay joke' but this stuffs alright dude,
Cause It's good to know that atleast someone hates Adam as much as I do,
You go to the pubs, bro. Bouncers scratch your face with gravel,
And If I'm thrown out a single bar. It's cause that's all I need to take this battle,
Think your verse draws a crowd? Ha, I know it's not bad to dream,
But in reality, dude? There's no way you'd ever have a ' fan to see,'
Think you the boss with words? But forreal, I ain't seein' this gay,
Cause this guys a dictator... Shit, typo. Replace that second T with a K,
I got talent coordinators lookin' at me, you don't see those,
Only scouts seeking Adam ask him "thin mints or do-si-dos?"
Thinks he conquers the sack. But dude, you're a joke with all chicks,
You got them sayin' "OH ADAM..... up and count how many votes you lost with."



Got lazy halfway through. Goodluck.

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I'm lazier than you..

Hahaha, I suck at this bullshit now, here's a free one..

We all have beliefs and well the crowd believes in you man,
But I'll be leaving this match with the title in hand.
I'm going to Trek over this mod, you can all watch it happen,
'Cause I can drop Shat with my verse and take down the captain.
This guy knows the whole league, that's how Kirk found his way,
But fuck your friends...
...........................Ahh shit, I won't hate on you Lay.
This fag gets raised and excited, to be blown he demands,
'Cause Kite likes being held in a ten year old's hands.
And Kirk I'll admit you're coming out stronger than you did before,
One time unknown, now your OneStep...
..............................................Beyo nd your closet door.
Your shits all the same, gay shots and fat girl lines,
1-800-668-6868, give that a shout and take a load off your mind.
I know you're all for the 60's, but man I'm keeping it fresh,
But I won't rag on the Beatles, I'll just beat you senseless.
Fuck the HW champ, give up the act and show some respect,
You're just a herb who got noticed when all the vets left.


Ughh, that's ugly.

Nobody is savin' you from this, bro. In this bout, you're a zero,
So, I'll just split Atom in half if he prefers goin' out like a Hiro.
okay.
This fag can't detach the truth, bro and this simple fact is proof,
The only thing that Adam's known for is his history of grabbin' fruits,
haha
And King Solo. I know you hate a 'gay joke' but this stuffs alright dude,
Cause It's good to know that atleast someone hates Adam as much as I do,
k.
You go to the pubs, bro. Bouncers scratch your face with gravel,
And If I'm thrown out a single bar. It's cause that's all I need to take this battle,
na.
Think your verse draws a crowd? Ha, I know it's not bad to dream,
But in reality, dude? There's no way you'd ever have a ' fan to see,'
coo wp.
Think you the boss with words? But forreal, I ain't seein' this gay,
Cause this guys a dictator... Shit, typo. Replace that second T with a K,
na..
I got talent coordinators lookin' at me, you don't see those,
Only scouts seeking Adam ask him "thin mints or do-si-dos?"
haha..
Thinks he conquers the sack. But dude, you're a joke with all chicks,
You got them sayin' "OH ADAM..... up and count how many votes you lost with."
lol..good closer.

vs

We all have beliefs and well the crowd believes in you man,
But I'll be leaving this match with the title in hand.
na to basic.
I'm going to Trek over this mod, you can all watch it happen,
'Cause I can drop Shat with my verse and take down the captain.
good concept..eh wording.
This guy knows the whole league, that's how Kirk found his way,
But fuck your friends...
...........................Ahh shit, I won't hate on you Lay.
lol coo.
This fag gets raised and excited, to be blown he demands,
'Cause Kite likes being held in a ten year old's hands.
lmao.
And Kirk I'll admit you're coming out stronger than you did before,
One time unknown, now your OneStep...
..............................................Beyo nd your closet door.
decent.
Your shits all the same, gay shots and fat girl lines,
1-800-668-6868, give that a shout and take a load off your mind.
eh..
I know you're all for the 60's, but man I'm keeping it fresh,
But I won't rag on the Beatles, I'll just beat you senseless.
basic.
Fuck the HW champ, give up the act and show some respect,
You're just a herb who got noticed when all the vets left.
ok personal.



This was closer than I originally thought, Adam you dropped better than you have been..shakin off that rust. You had some ups an downs..you had some funny lines..some potential lines..an one or two played concepts..jus try an stay away from the basic shit..get a lil more creative, kirk had the usual consistency an edged it with a more polished verse.

v/kirk

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Fear

Nobody is savin' you from this, bro. In this bout, you're a zero,
So, I'll just split Atom in half if he prefers goin' out like a Hiro.
kinda forced, but ok
This fag can't detach the truth, bro and this simple fact is proof,
The only thing that Adam's known for is his history of grabbin' fruits,
lol, a gay joke indeed.. but for once you flipped it nice and also managed to drop a fresh flip with the nameplay
And King Solo. I know you hate a 'gay joke' but this stuffs alright dude,
Cause It's good to know that atleast someone hates Adam as much as I do,
nah, this was pure gayness
You go to the pubs, bro. Bouncers scratch your face with gravel,
And If I'm thrown out a single bar. It's cause that's all I need to take this battle,
swagger was ok, bar pretty average
Think your verse draws a crowd? Ha, I know it's not bad to dream,
But in reality, dude? There's no way you'd ever have a ' fan to see,'
wordplay was ok, a lil forced though
Think you the boss with words? But forreal, I ain't seein' this gay,
Cause this guys a dictator... Shit, typo. Replace that second T with a K,
hell no! i did a similar bar with the typo shit a while back and it didn't really work for me then, lmao.. so it ain't working for you now
I got talent coordinators lookin' at me, you don't see those,
Only scouts seeking Adam ask him "thin mints or do-si-dos?"
pretty funny
Thinks he conquers the sack. But dude, you're a joke with all chicks,
You got them sayin' "OH ADAM..... up and count how many votes you lost with."
ur best bar, it had swagger and comedy.. nice


VS.


We all have beliefs and well the crowd believes in you man,
But I'll be leaving this match with the title in hand.
wtf!?! this was gay
I'm going to Trek over this mod, you can all watch it happen,
'Cause I can drop Shat with my verse and take down the captain.
wordplay was cool, decent nameplay to
This guy knows the whole league, that's how Kirk found his way,
But fuck your friends...
...........................Ahh shit, I won't hate on you Lay.
nah, not feeling this
This fag gets raised and excited, to be blown he demands,
'Cause Kite likes being held in a ten year old's hands.
concept was cool, not feeling the wording though
And Kirk I'll admit you're coming out stronger than you did before,
One time unknown, now your OneStep...
..............................................Beyo nd your closet door.
lol, a gay joke that i laughed at.. but not as good as Kirk's was
Your shits all the same, gay shots and fat girl lines,
1-800-668-6868, give that a shout and take a load off your mind.
eh, not liking this
I know you're all for the 60's, but man I'm keeping it fresh,
But I won't rag on the Beatles, I'll just beat you senseless.
ok, not great
Fuck the HW champ, give up the act and show some respect,
You're just a herb who got noticed when all the vets left.
OUCH! simple wording but hard hitting


Lmfao @ how both guys best bar was the closer. Anyway, this match had way too many ups and downs to make it a great match. I felt that Adam was a bit more responsible for those ups and downs... his verse just didn't maintain that level of consistency he used to have back in the day. Kirk has gotten a lot better since them long ago days where I beat him twice, lol son. But yeah, Kirk had a more polished verse, stayed stronger with the consistency and had a few extra bars that had a bit more quality about them.

Vote: Kirk

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Nobody is savin' you from this, bro. In this bout, you're a zero,
So, I'll just split Atom in half if he prefers goin' out like a Hiro.
lmfao, this was pretty ill +1
This fag can't detach the truth, bro and this simple fact is proof,
The only thing that Adam's known for is his history of grabbin' fruits,
it's decent but soooooo played out man
And King Solo. I know you hate a 'gay joke' but this stuffs alright dude,
Cause It's good to know that atleast someone hates Adam as much as I do,
lmao sick +2
You go to the pubs, bro. Bouncers scratch your face with gravel,
And If I'm thrown out a single bar. It's cause that's all I need to take this battle,
nah played and wack wording
Think your verse draws a crowd? Ha, I know it's not bad to dream,
But in reality, dude? There's no way you'd ever have a ' fan to see,'
cool wordplay, bad wording.
Think you the boss with words? But forreal, I ain't seein' this gay,
Cause this guys a dictator... Shit, typo. Replace that second T with a K,
LMFAO, i love this one +3
I got talent coordinators lookin' at me, you don't see those,
Only scouts seeking Adam ask him "thin mints or do-si-dos?"
nahh
Thinks he conquers the sack. But dude, you're a joke with all chicks,
You got them sayin' "OH ADAM..... up and count how many votes you lost with."
nope aint feeling it

vs.

We all have beliefs and well the crowd believes in you man,
But I'll be leaving this match with the title in hand.
lmao wtf? nahh
I'm going to Trek over this mod, you can all watch it happen,
'Cause I can drop Shat with my verse and take down the captain.
pretty good +1
This guy knows the whole league, that's how Kirk found his way,
But fuck your friends...
...........................Ahh shit, I won't hate on you Lay.
lol i thought this was good too, +2[b]
This fag gets raised and excited, to be blown he demands,
'Cause Kite likes being held in a ten year old's hands.
[b]nah you coulda worded this so much better, it was a good concept
And Kirk I'll admit you're coming out stronger than you did before,
One time unknown, now your OneStep...
..............................................Beyo nd your closet door.
nooooooooooooo
Your shits all the same, gay shots and fat girl lines,
1-800-668-6868, give that a shout and take a load off your mind.
lmao what's that? childrens help line? lmfaooo
I know you're all for the 60's, but man I'm keeping it fresh,
But I won't rag on the Beatles, I'll just beat you senseless.
it was ok but not hard enough
Fuck the HW champ, give up the act and show some respect,
You're just a herb who got noticed when all the vets left.
ooohh hardcore +3

Yea i got it at 3-3, Adam you shoulda tried a lil harder this is closer then you though it'd be, ima have to give it to Kirk tho cuz tho you both had some good lines his best were better then your best and his other lines i didn't quote were better then yours i didnt quote

v/kirk

I was expecting to get pwned, didn't want to ruin everybody's predictions.

i gotta go with kirk on this one. adam almost had it and in my eyes he did til he started slippin. kirk once again stayed good enough to win. if you want more pm me or something, my eyes hurt somethin fierce.

vote: kirk

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