~my Thoughts As A Man~
I am.....
a man, a wandering minstrel, pondering questions/ honoring what trends?, i set standards that of a seraphim/ and ALLAH take care of him, my bretheren on the forefront/ for days,nights,weeks, months, and years ,death is a sequel, i wage no war on any people/ cause they are MY people, the same people with skin of brass and hair of lambs wool/ the same who mask the blood of their beliefs in pits that the sand pulled/ i dont understand, who has the right to wage genocide on humanity/ can it be, morally standard/, please, i wage war under this canopy/ that i call a body, it houses my life force/ i'm blind to the truth, or maybe my eyes sore/ or maybe theyr'e wrong, forget it ,cause theres no god but Allah..and Allah is that true mercifull god/ but thye're losing children, it's bullshit, i sigh, sob/ war proves nothing, this is wierd, they want us to join da military and the marine corps/ and i dont mean more than the crack rock of truth that humanity feinds for/ a sacred city falls, and the angels bow their heads in pure astonishment/ and i'm not proud of this, the ignorance of money that has shrouded men/ or centuries, ameneties, men will breath, freinds will bleed/ women are siezed, deflowered and sentenced with seed/ while i sit and watch the media make fools out of my democracy/ and it proves absolutely squat to ME, this is all nonsense and hipocracy/ saddam sits in a hotter seat, and frankly it bothers me/ cause he's fighting for a truth HIS people see constantly/ my GOD is better than noone elses, i'm not omnipotent, i have no say so in judging others/ but what the fuck do we do when we take sons from loving mothers?/ when we take funds from poverty stricken brothers, with no food in their cupboards/ do we tell them that also our american president is right and to deal with it and suffer?/ i'm a muslim man, and so is that man, even in pakistan/ i'm out of breath in this race for survival, even though the last lap is ran/ so what happens when, we wipe out innocents, cause we are, in a sense/ and jihad is emminent, all because of our ignorance/ the towers fell for a reason, dont seaize its treasonous hipocracy/ cause if you love this spot like me, you'll give props to GOD up top, with ease/ i'm no angel, i have my faults, granted i'm no demon either/ but these heathens seem to breed lust, treat cuts, and seam the sleepers/ i'm but one man, my words will go on deaf ears, even so, i've given my two cents, for the world to use them/ but let it be known that i AM MY BROTHERS KEEPER, when he reaches, i wont refuse him........... yo............dont give a fuck wut ya'll feedbacks ar am just puttin my thoughts on paper......... |
UPPUN Sleeeeeeeeeeeeeperssssssss
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great vocab and what not
but the jewel of this piece is the flow my fav examples are: "or maybe theyr'e wrong, forget it ,cause theres no god but Allah..and Allah is that true mercifull god/" and "so what happens when, we wipe out innocents, cause we are, in a sense/ and jihad is emminent, all because of our ignorance/ " both of those are two of the best flows Ive heard great drop man way to keep shit opinionated |
I really liked tha flow and rhymes you spit.
"cause they are MY people, the same people with skin of brass and hair of lambs wool/ the same who mask the blood of their beliefs in pits that the sand pulled/" I erally liked these lines. great metaphors and rhyme scheme. keep spittin |
Fosho fosho......thnx Hooligan....Uppun
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yo, nice deep shit as usual ruth.. there were some nice multies lacin' this track. word paly was up to your normal standard, you got mad tallent... yo, PM me too, I gotta talk to you about a crew thing..
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Aight Blunt.......ama HOLLA
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yo this was hella tight. very nice drop. excellent vocab, nice wordplay and metas and the topic was just great. good shit
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THNX yo...i apreciate...tha feedback.....REP ~War Lords~ to tha fullest..........
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damn very well writtin. sweet fuckin play oin words throughout the whole thing. thx for the feeback on the poem dawg
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ILL.....fosho thnx i apreciate it............^^^^^^^
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honoring what trends?, i set standards that of a seraphim/
and ALLAH take care of him, my bretheren on the forefront/ that was ILL yo... feelin this piece from head to toe... hit me up for a collabo dawg.. stay up.. peace 101 |
Thnx dawg..........just got to represent feel me.....and yea u wanted to get it at WAR LORDS.....go to try outs...and drop a verse ama holla bac
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Ill, Deep, Tight An some great wordplay Keep it goin
an keep it gangsta! |
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