dw VS rule
 

10-16 lines if thats okie with you say whether or not in check in..if not i'll just go ten
No hate/dr/unexplained/crew votes
blind spit---20 minutes after check in

Regualr rules

Good luck man.

peace

lets jus do ten...people can't be arsed readin any more....check in!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!im ere.........1

lol iight man im checkin in good luck
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in a soft focus you still look the fool...obeyin nothin from this rule...
a new dual on the horizen...my heat leaves u runnin to the freezer to get cool...
im breakin numerous bones wiv these sticks 'n' these stones...
u breakin nothin but a sweat...n losin weight in stones...
i magnify ur lyrics but still recieve no big hit....spit so quik...
that its me that has to identify that you've jus been hit...
split ya verse so its double the agony that follows in the sequel...
rule?...theres nothin ere thats suggests us two people are equal...
front page crew its almost laughable that you believe ur not new...
ur jus 1 fragment of a 12 piece puzzle theres nothin complexed about you....1


*soft focus = 12 members/front page

This kids inarticulate the way he throws punches is expandable
Dick Where? DWs faverite sayen thats why I nickname ya canabel
Your verses disipated all used up like Micheal Jordans Career
Recycled and re-used your past ya climax you should just disaper
Damn, those jeezus scriptures for verses they're always recarnated
Playboy called me out then vanished cause he shook possibly hesitated
This kids a vet. a soldja? he has 45 wins but his loss count is distinction
I'm gunna study the DW man an claim how he casually faced exstinction
He called out rule for a battle with a win ego an realized dreams are fiction
DW on my resume ya assigned if I win will this be an acceptable aplication?

If You Don't Undersand something Just Ask.

Uppe for your verse

oh sorry man didn't realise you posted ya verse--------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------

alrite uppin this....gud battle man!.............................................. ......................................1

This kids inarticulate the way he throws punches is expandable
Dick Where? DWs faverite sayen thats why I nickname ya canabel

I vote dw cuz he had better wordplay, his verse was stronger by a bit and his hits were hard.....the line ive outlined is wack as fuck from rule....

DW GOT IT!

thanx 1-0.....uppin this!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!

hmmm some one over did the vocab.....
punches- Dw
flo- Dw
structure- Rule
meti4- Dw
Multi- Dw
Overall- Dw......but a decent battle....i can put my dictinary away now...

yo carson thanx but can ya poll that plz!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............................ .........................................1

uppin this y'all............................................. .................................................. .................................................. .....!

dw was a little better. good battle though. im voting for dw.-------------------------------------------------------------------

Aight boiz that was a good battle but DW came out on top wit better word play flow, creativity, but rule u did good in vocab and nothin else compared too DW

vote DW

hit this battle up wit an honets vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=100172

alrite thanx....

4-0 txt

3-0 poll

can ya plz remember to poll.............................................. ...............pz