young mike vs.lewd
 

15 bar max
no d/r
no crew votes
no hate votes
u 1st

hit this up please speek only the truth http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101706

checkin in .................................................. .................................................. .. didn't even know we were battlin but what ever.........................

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spit nigga............................................. .............................................

Ima call you cashues,cuz u must me nuts,
try to tell jokes,but u alway end up the butts,
Which is concievable cuz ur rhymes weak as hell,
they like condoms in africa,they just don't sell,
Well, young mike you just to young for the mic,
14 year old tyke,who hasn't learned to ride the ryhme bike,
Hypotheticaly you could beat me,if you sniffed up my lines,
but youd just sneeze them out,cuz i won with white lines,
killed 2 times,like a raven i found you and flew to new haven,
stealthly behavin,crept threw the house and slaugtered u bathin.

*hes 14
*people are called the butt of the joke
*cashues are nuts
*im white-so white lines
*hes from new haven

yo its 10 lines i stated taht in my bitch slap.............................................. .................................................. .......

what are you mad cause im from new haven//
im killin a 2 birds with one stone or should i say a raven//
lost twice but if i can help then three//
talk bout nuts and buts was this guy hittin on me//
you remind me of a rapest like kobe//
fuck you and your contry go warship a leaf//
yeah i know my line are kind of weak//
well your from canada so you cant speek//
your like jay-z its your time//
half the shit you said didnt even rhyeme

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101706 hit it up nice battle son

no feedin of other peoples spits bud,i don't care though.........................UPPIN lets get some votes............................................. .................................................. ......

Lewd

Ima call you cashues,cuz u must me nuts,
try to tell jokes,but u alway end up the butts,
pretty witty, nice, 6/10

Which is concievable cuz ur rhymes weak as hell,
they like condoms in africa,they just don't sell,
an aiight punch, 5/10

Well, young mike you just to young for the mic,
14 year old tyke,who hasn't learned to ride the ryhme bike,
not too good, because of bad wordplay, 4/10

Hypotheticaly you could beat me,if you sniffed up my lines,
but youd just sneeze them out,cuz i won with white lines,
lol, actually a nice concept, an wordplay, 7/10

killed 2 times,like a raven i found you and flew to new haven,
stealthly behavin,crept threw the house and slaugtered u bathin.
an aiight closer, not the best 5/10

overall- 27/50

jus need to keep elevatin, vocab mostly. nice drop.



Young Mike
what are you mad cause im from new haven//
im killin a 2 birds with one stone or should i say a raven//
fed off his verse, loses effect 5/10

lost twice but if i can help then three//
talk bout nuts and buts was this guy hittin on me//
another feeds, but not too bad, 6/10

you remind me of a rapest like kobe//
fuck you and your contry go warship a leaf//
didnt ryhme, wack punch, 4/10

yeah i know my line are kind of weak//
well your from canada so you cant speek//
at least it ryhmes, but still bad wordplay, horrible, 4/10

your like jay-z its your time//
half the shit you said didnt even rhyeme
very simplistic 4/10

jus keep elevatin, your verse was very simple at time, an lacked, vocab, wordplay an a decent punch.
but you had an aiight one, thats what you want all your raps to be like, try not to feed, an jus keep bein creative.



overall Lewd


plz drop an honest vote on this battle
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101874

thanks for the breakdown.i wish more people did that.........................keep on votin.......................................

ight,young mike u really fuckin destroyed this guy,lewd what the fuck were u talking about the whole time,the rhyme bike,wtf?,u need to really elevate.young mike,u flowed good,good structure and i wasnt bored readin it,my vote is young mike

try to tell jokes,but u alway end up the butts
^ bitten

humor-young mike
punches-Lewd
personals-young mike
flow-tie
structure-Lewd
entertainment-young mike
vote-young mike

Vote disqualified. Please see this thread on what makes a valid vote.
-Cprogress

killashea ur a dik rider son, anybody can easily see that after u sayin that bull shit........
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