Verstyle vs Crooked-Comical
 

10 lines Minimum 20 lines Max

*All Rules Apply
*You Drop 1st
*Verse due 1 hour after check in
*Quike Battle
*All Votes Must Be Explained
the right way

Good Luck!!:hump:

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Dawg where you at.. are you going to check in or what. im not spitting till you check in. dont what to wast a verse on a no show

HURRY UP

Thank You
Peace

holy fuck man dont get a boner ..... unlike you i have a life i was at the mall man ... i come back and u got 757378380 posts yelling at me like i just killed somebody fuck


CHECK IN!

Alright ,

Your Obviously A Message Board Loser , A Life You Cant Get /
Your Like A Goalie, Your Hole Life Revolves Around "The Net"/
Your 4 - 0 , But Your 4 Opponents Were All Just Totally Weak/
Your Like A Lil Boy Who Poos Himself,You Got A Shit "Streak"/
This is An Easy Win For Me ,An Easy Keystyle Against Versyle/
I "Flow" Better Then Moses Did Through The Nile In The Bible/
Cant Diss My Style , Im So "Sick" I Need A Motherfuckin Nurse/
My Structure Is Str8ter Then Yur mouth When U Read My Verse/ :|
I Havent Even Reached My Peek-U Suck and Wont Get Better/
Your Sig Says Assasin,But You Only deserve The 1st 3 Letters/ASS



PEACE!!!!

Funny the way you choose the least about of bars..Im Wrtitin write now..i'll drop in 10min

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OK ??? Sorry Next Time You Should Put Put In The Rules

10 - 20 lines ... ( Oh But If you do Ten lines Ill make fun Of You And sway Votes )


You Fuckin Herb

youll drop in ten minutes .. weird ... its an hour later .. wait a minute .. an hour .. oh yeah ..hoyur was time limit

YOUR DQUED

ill get mod in here to give me my win alright

1st "10-20 lines" is in the rules..Hoe

verstyle the best?? no longer thoughts are debated
battlin me, will still get your thoughts tossed & faded
First spot is taken, maybe second best better fits you
Spits official putting a hole through your chest dat whistles
Sores and purple bruises matched with spores of mucus
rip your cords in two fifths until your jaw lines in toothless
thin ass chest can't absorb abusives, battlin me is useless
Either bored or stupid, I'm cold shivers from an Alaskan blizzard
an apprentice to postman but sadly you will nerver deliver
you couldn't withstand the aftermath of my nuclear blast
you beating me is impossible like takin a shit with no ass
fact or fiction? Allow me to debate this shit..................
the only hot line you'll drop............
...........was a piss stain running down your pants leg bitch
truth is im evil my battle tactics can't be mistaken as candid
cut off both hands have you leaving this battle empty handed
Close da books I've beat better mc's just by the stare of my looks
you'r that pirate from Peter Pan so you cant beat my hooks

im not really sure which way this battle went. but i just think that verstyle came a lil harder than c-c. a few punches here and there. some personals. close battle. nice drop from both.

vote - ver

it wont let me edit so im gonna post it better here:

ver - nice punches. good structure. some vocab. few personals. not bad drop

c-c - nice punches. good vocab. personals. ehh, ok drop.

Crooked-Comical .. let me Quote You.. "Sorry For Having a Life"
You didnt see me Bitch when i set the battle up and you didnt show 2 hours 30mins. You Saw my verse and thought of a Bitch way to win, just as i suspected.. Well If i get DQ'ed you should too an nobody gets a win. since you did the same.. HOE

versityle had awesome structure....


he had better punches and personals too

this battle was kinda weak though
hmmmm both need elevating

try using more metas

anyway vote versyltel

Opener ---- Comical
Closer ---- Tie
Punches ----Comical, haha I could tell he got back home from the mall and read all that shit and just unloaded on this kid about how he has no life, good shit, writing the facts is always a good verse
Verstyle ur punches were good but they couldve been delivered to anyone, i prefer personal shit
Metaphors ---- Verstyle
Good battle My vote ---- Comical----note a hate vote plz dont hate, and please return the favor ---- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450

and NO i didnt vote based on my opinion, i just went with the facts, his was personal yours wasnt ---------------------------------------------------------

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102450