Yo What Up vs. Soulfire
 

aight son........

10 lines

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verses due 30 min after check in.......

good luck.........

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ill start keystylin my shit after u check in..........

verses will be due in 30 min after that..........

Aight yo. May the best man win.
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aight here we go...........

yo its no question that i spit-mean, honestly kid u do ya best but u aint shit-to-me/
i rip-emcees, dam ur wack, ur record says 1-0, but really u aint fit-for-me/

u can sit-an-feed, my modes-on-flame, but like vince carter dunkin, im just "ova-ya-game"/
its the end of the road-to-ya-name, u could put a loaded nine to my head and still not know the "code-to-aim"/

im on top-of-my-game, it dont take a genius to realize its gonna be another 5-to-0, cause theres no way ur gonna survive-my-blows/
im alive-u-know, i cant be stopped, so i take it upon myself to drive-this-show/

im alive-u-know, my whole-verse-is-finer, this cat states hes sick of gettin served but yet he "owns-a-diner"/
im the fuckin sole-sourvivor, im relenteless, i dip u in gasoline just to light ur "soul-on-fire"/

i control-this-minor, this guy sees-dicks, and deep down its obvious u really wanna be-a-chick/
my punches hit like 30-bricks, shit, the only chance u have of comin close would be to re do my shit in a remix/

EXPLANATIONS-
pretty damn easy to follow but for u stupid bitches

1st bar- his records 1-0

2nd bar- when vince carter dunks hes over everybody else playin, his punches couldnt hit me from point blank range

3rd bar- self explanitory

4th bar-if u own a diner they SERVE food, his name is soul fire

5th bar- he could only beat me if he re did my own verse
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waitin on u.........its been about a half an hour and i gotta go soon, so hurry up and drop..........u checked in at 1240 est. its 1 est......u have 10 min.............

shit.........yall should let people edit there own posts so it can prevent me from havin to make a whole seperate post to correct myself.............

the last line in the third bar is supposed to say..........

i ride-this-ho, i cant be stopped, so i take it upon myself to drive-this-show/

i was thinkin to fast, cause then in the fourth bar i typed the same multis, so instead of im alive-u-know in the third bar its supposed to say i ride-this-ho..........

none of yall better say i used the same multi twice..........cause i just corrected it..........hurry ur ass up soulfire and drop.............u got 5 min now...........

Yo what up ain't nobody tell you Soulfire is serious,
When I spit my rhymes out bitch I'm fuckin' delirious,
I blow up the fuckin' spot son, wherever I go,
Everybody's head turns, cause Soulfire's the show,
Yo, bitch, play with fire and your gonna burned,
After this brutal ass kickin' bitch I hope you will learn,
Challenging me was the worst mistake you ever made,
After this battle I'm gonna fuckin' piss on your parade,
So next time your dumb ass gets on RB to play games,
Remember this, you fuckin bitch, don't mess with lone flame.

Yo, good battle. Let's get some votes in this piece.

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that were a tite battle, gotta go wit......... 'vir' some of his punches were hot as a mo'fvcker.......structure the lot were all good.......souls, u were pretty sweet an all.....but ure punches lacked to 'yo'. An as well need to do is work on the structure.......vote*yo

Ill poll vote when i can, ill keep the link handy fo ya's.....should be rdy fo tomoz....so keep the vote counting.....or PM if i fo'get.

return the favour....http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102698

^^^aight thanx homie...........much appreciated...........

UPPIN!!!!! #1.........

fuck 100 characters fuck 100 characters fuck 100 characters

Uppin #1
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UPPIN #2!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

cmon now............this is a pretty tight battle, lets get some votes up in herre.............

aight soulfire took this

his structure was much better and his vocab and wordplay were better. this battle didnt really have that many punches or personals but i think that soulfire won this

good battle

hit this up with an honest vote

i need one more
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=102465

return the favor cuz i took the time

LMFAO...........i had punches, and i had a personal line.........sorry holmes but structure doesnt win a battle..........and yea, he had structure on me, but i had multis, metas, wordplay, punches, and personals..........seriously dude.............ur opinion though, ill drop my 2 cents on ur battle, but whateva..........i think thats bullshit though...........

This was tight:
flow:Soul
vocab:tie
multies:Yo
punches:Yo

This was a tight battle man Soul had some good lines but Yo What up had tha punches.

Hit this up with a honest vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...&postid=1022645