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ILLunatic 01-03-04 01:43 AM

ILLunatic v.s 8th World Wonder
 
LMFAO at this kids name... He deserves to be sonned


|-Rules-|
10 Lines
You drop first
No feeding
No biteing
No recycling
No stretching
No crew votes
No hate votes
No d/r votes



Lets go ......

8th World Wonder 01-03-04 01:54 AM

they call the 8th wonder/
cause i spit thunder/
like rain storms/
u betta brain storm/
and think of tatics/
to keep yo faggot ass/
out of a caskit/
im done fuckin wit these lames/
my game is real simple/
if u step up/
im pop ur dirty ass like a pimple/
so when i pull out/
ya gots ta run/
u dont....ill send u to heaven/
to meet big....pac...and pun../
im the one..like neo from matrix/
the should call me cancer/
the way my ryhmes stay sick/
ya ryhmes is basic...like crak wit no bags/
if i would see u in person./
i would problly slap ya hoe ass/
im so fast/ furious like vin diziel/
my ryhems will have u runnin to the feds screamin/
THIS KIDS LETHAL/
no disrespect dawg,,,ya ryhmes is trash/
matta of fact shitty.....so i geuss ya rhymes is ass/
plus i got ur gurl on me cause she likes the love/
plus she knows i give more punches/
then tysons glove....im out....1

ILLunatic 01-03-04 02:04 AM

LMFAO... ... ...i said 10 lines... ... ...this kid did 29
Oh well dont matter... ... ... ...Kid done fell behind
Spittin wack rhymes... ... ... ... ...thinkin he got me
If i was a rocking chair..i bet he still couldn't rock me
Kid you weak...Dont even understand any rules
This is like Lighting a fire.. and i'm the gas he fuels
Damn....I dont even really feel like sonning this kid
But he the one that talked, and started runnin his lip
Fuck it i'm down to my last bar... ta blaze this fag
Rocked him...And rock hats....I ripped him like a du rag

ILLunatic 01-03-04 02:05 AM

LMFAO...
I was laughin to hard at his verse
I could barely do mine...
I came easy on his ass.......
Votes Please...

High Class 01-03-04 02:08 AM

I cant believe this. Ill came that easy and still got this shit... LOL...
The vote would go to him either way, cause the other guy broke the rules... Ill had better punches and better everything LoL

vote - ILL

8th World Wonder 01-03-04 02:10 AM

bull shit...fuckin dick ryder...he said one thing....dont do this get ya boys to vote for u shit................i merked his ass............................................... .................................................. ..

HipHop101 01-03-04 02:11 AM

LMAO, his punk ass.

Since when did "The End" become 8th World Wonder.

Aw-Well...Like the name change homie. I like your style too.

BreakDown:

Illunatic said 10 lines your dumb ass spit 29...LMAO
All of his shit hit harder than you. You had no vocab, no multis, no wordplay, Dope Punches...Your punches str8 up kilt his tho...
(LMAO) Just playin..You had whack punches.

Illunatic kilt you in every aspect of the battle.

Well, at least "The End" can go back to Admin and change the polls to make it look like he won.










































LMAO I'm just playin wit you homie, End, you know I love you.

ILLunatic 01-03-04 02:12 AM

LMFAO..
Kid.... You got sonned.....
Dont bitch....
I said 10 lines.. you did 29
YOU'VE BEEN SONNED....

High Class 01-03-04 02:13 AM

D/R, Funny... I guess you dont like the truth. Why dont we battle, except... Spit normal bars you fuckin idiot. Are you to damn stupid to write normal bars? Shit the fuck up, your shit was wack...

ClassX 01-03-04 02:14 AM

ill won this..

ill - punchs were aight.. nothin spectacular but u did what you had to do to win.. flow was cool.. some wordplay.. not bad job

8th- u wrote like it was an audio track..shitty structure no real punchs bad wordplay if any.. sorry guy

vote - ill

ILLunatic 01-03-04 02:14 AM

KiDKiLLaH73269: u aint got shit...i got a deal though.......i mean really....u didnt say shit ....



LMFAO... He says he got a deal...
He aint got shit...Be sides a loss comin to his record...LMFAO

Reflektionz 01-03-04 02:15 AM

my game is real simple/
if u step up/
im pop ur dirty ass like a pimple/

Lol

Luna took this better structure he came half assed

an shud up his compettion..

othet kid your a newb an thats it

u suk an ya flowz are too basic

ILLunatic 01-03-04 02:16 AM

Come on ya'll
Lets get the votes up
So this kid feels stupid
...........DAMN........
Shemy...
High Class
Verstyle
Chrit
H4iKU
They all laughin they asses off at this

Eki 01-03-04 02:17 AM

IllLunetic this was one of the worste verses i have see you do. however you still finished miles on top of the 8th. you know what they say if you play bad and win .. imagine when you play good. But this other kid needs to elevate. Big time. Those symple lines wont win you any battles anytime soon. Up the vocab, clean up the structure , start chucking ounches. haha where do i end.

Vote Ill

please return a honest vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101620

ILLunatic 01-03-04 02:18 AM

Come on ya'll....
None of you are poll votin...
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