FreeYayo vs Da Saviour
 

10 linez min
20 linez max
no crew or hate votez
u spit first
pz.

ok, new rule, 15 minutes maximun, ok? got to go
i start, good luck.........................
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aight I'll post within' 15 minutez after your drop.............................................. ...........................................

Ok, here i go

Your shit wont ever touch me, your style is too weak
but its all we can hope for a flick, people like you make me sick
cant understand u when u speak, inside your mouth theres a dick
What kind of record is that??, please, take a sincere look
0-6, got no hook, so bad you will enter into guiness records book
man, better 4 you 2 scoop low, cuz u dont have a clue,
nor have good flow, and this battle will get u definetly out the blue
Stop rapping so motherfucking bad, its the easiest battle i ever had
But, its hard to accept, seeing to a so wack oponent make me sad
So freeyayo, leave this hiphop shit while you can,
many people enquired to have your ass banned
Fuck you, nig figure out who will you b able to rap with,
Cuz u wont take a "yes" even from Will Smith!

peace bro

ok must fo now, get time... 30 minutes

good luck yayo!!

0034 4 ever!!!!
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yo yo
lemme get a win here...
yo...
dun close this battle and make it my loss again bitch
u know who u r. faggot BASTARD
aight yo yo

u call yaself da saviour, but u aint savin' shit
I come in special flavours, can u feel me kid ?/
dunnow why u even comin' down to this site
u aint a hype with a mic even if u waz here all night/
the only 'mic/mike' u ever killed was that kid in junior high
I saw ya last rhymez, they were wack and outta style/
I'm hot as ever so why even bother goin' against me dawg?
becuz of the 0-6? That bitch fm made it my loss/
my name freeyayo but aint lookin' to get saved though
u can only dream bout a battle on stage in some lame show/
cuz letz face it kid, anyone can tell u fake
I know how u feel round here, u feel kinda misplaced/
that only becuz u on a rapsite lookin' kinda lost
what u doin' round here anyway? I thought u liked rock/
now plz close ya mouth bitch cuz u only talkin' shit kid
u startin' to draw flies so here's my mentos take it/

aight. Now someone plz vote and I will vote if u drop a link, BUT I can't drop a countin' vote cuz of the 100 posts shit, I can only judge it. PZ.

hey you dropped it really quick....
how could ya type this in about 2 minutes??
well, try not to get banned this time

vote please

4 minutez friend. I follow office (probably some other name in english but don't know it) and we have typin' as a fuckin' lesson round here. I'm the best lolz. Can type real fast, will prove it to u anytime :). PZ.

6 minutez, my bad............................................... .................................................. .. u can tell I dun follow maths lolz.

opener:Da Saviour
closer:Tie (both Wack)
entertainment:Da Saviour
Punches:Da Saviour
Flow:Da Saviour
Vote Da Saviour

drop a vote on this please be honest------ http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101986

wat the fuck that didnt cum out rite y is the a smily face rite
opener-da Saviour
closer-Tie (both Wack)
entertainment-da Saviour
Punches-da Saviour
Flow-da Saviour
Vote-da Saviour

Return the favor and vote honestly on this please -- http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=101986

yo both were wack, but yayo u wernt hittin, and da savoiur u could have really merked this hoe, come on free yayo, how many wordplay go wit that,
but savoiur hit hard enuff wit the 6 nil lines,

my votes for saviour

no vote
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...threadid=103618

uppin............................................. .................................................. .................................................. ..........x1

Ok here is how I score it
Structure: Da Saviour easy to read understandable
Punches: Da Saviour even though both were boring
Metaphors: Tie non present
Intro: Da Saviour even both were not strong

My Vote: Da Saviour easy

uppin.................................all votez weren't explained legal wayz but I aint bitchin' bout that shit juzt watch ya backz cuz some bitchez around (yeah u) that DQ and ban u for dumb shit. PZ.