DaJoka vs Unspoken Lyrikz
 

10-14 linez
Blind Spit
No D/R
No Hate

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See Son The Only Way You Roll Better Then Me Is Backwords..
Against Me.. Cheating In Scrabble Still Couldnt Match Words..
Just Like Butchers At Thrift Stores.. Cant Cut A Deal To Win..
Like Mother Like Son ..He's Taking Hits And Shot's To The Chin..
Like Orphans On Fathers Day.. In This Shit I'll Never Be Sonned..
Meat Gets More Praise Then His Verse.. Cuz Steak Can Be Well Done..
You's A Real Joka, Just Like Premature E-Jack.. Accidentally Burst..
Think You're A Hit Man? I'll Leave.. So You Can Whack Off To My Verse..
Thought This Be An Easy Win.. Then How Come You Punked On Acro Nim..
Guess You Saw Our Roster Then Rather Then Beefing You Were Running

Unspoken lyrics? nigga wonder why?that shits wackness is un measurable/
why u log on nigga? twisted bitch u must think failures more pleasurable/
unspoken thinkin he known? bitch gonna remain unheard/
but really we the ones who have to here his shit, so why the fuck we gettin tortured/
u know u gettin jealous when im rollin in this Benz wit golden rims just go and sob/
this niggas still clueless? ohh yea he only know one kinda rimjob/
this kids notin but a bitch in big boy pants,im overflowin this nigga wit savage rants/
this nigga wallets thinner then his dick, nigga bring new meaning to pennywise/
but wait this mutha fuckas a hard killa!!! let me put the gun to my chest! im thinkin its all lies/
this kids constantly seeing L's and he aighnt playin tetris/
this kids kinda like figure skatin but he comes wit less hits/
blank clips, bare hits, dont risk it kid u cant spare wits/

i know its pretty shitty i think... but i havent battled in so long.. w/e

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flow- unspoken

punches-unspoken

creativity-unspoken

hoenstly it was no challenge......unspoken murdered this cat....better punches and everything......the other cat didnt even ryhems half of the time....come on now...

vot-unspoken

Opener:unspoken
Closer:unspoken
Flow: dajoka
Creativity:unspoken
Vote unspoken he won this pretty easy!

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damn i really thought da joka was gon take this hmmmmm

dajoka had some real potential for a hot verse with his opener but didnt live up to it

as far as unspoken goes if u keep at it u'll elevate but this verse wasn't the best either

but over all and all and all

vote: unspoken





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fuck...get 100posts and poll..I should be up 3-0....uppin for votes.....................................

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yup unspoken won enough said


punches better and witter blah
personals made sense and blah
flow was easier to read




vote unspoken

uppin x4...come on guys don't sleep..end this battle...I am up 4-0....but we need guys wit 100 posts....vote and finish....upppin yall....

Unspoken came stronger... now usually I would quote and put a long explination but im so fuckin lazy... lol good punches

vote- unspoken



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