Se7eN v.s Poetictendenceez
 

Ayo rules

10-14 lines
spit by 12
no d/r or crew votes and no bullshit votes

good luck dawg

check in and I'll start typing

(verse)

Ayo,
I roll over this bitch wit a tire, and go straight through the wire
He couldn’t burn rhymes, if he set a Dr. Suess book on fire
So question, this situation that I keep trying and pressin’
I use my words wisely and he uses his as a suicidal weapon
Rejection, he’s gonna spit by 12, writing 5 hours to himself
Wouldn’t help, if he soled his soul 2 Satan while he vistied hell
OOO well, maybe Grade A shit, so let’s say OK bitch
He thinks he’s bad wit 200+ posts, turned into 200 gay spits
Se7eN will rip ya, eat ya, and squat and go ahead and shit ya
Because my punches tend to hit ya where the Lord split ya
So keep calm, while I drop ya a lyrically blowing up bomb
Remove you from this site and it still will be rapbattles.com

check in dawg ************************************************** ************************************************** ******************* ****** *

Man any MOD close this please if this battle goes past 12 pm PZ, AND THANX, GUESS TE PUSSY BACKED DOWN

haha...fuck you....bout to drop....i got shit to do dawg, I ain't some pussy-ass bitch like you sitting on his computer all day...get a damn life - bitch

fuck, checkin in now....got shit done, gonna spit...PEACE

nobody loves to hate you, and nobody hates to love you
in fact nigga, no one's really thinking of you
haha, i already merked you, with only two goddamn lines
you're whole crew's worthless, like a paralyzed mime
i'd give you all your lyrics, and even a fuckn gat
even with both, you couldn't put a hole in my back
clack clack, is the sound from the lyrics you flow
your rhymes are empty, unlike your boyfriends asshole
you're a perverted mother fucker, killing emcees when you "spit right"
shit dawg, you spit first, and didn't even put up a fight
fuck spittn a rhyme and becoming a soldier with time
i'm already a goddamn coronel, you're a fuckn private of mine*



*coronel is one of the highest ranks in the army - private is really low, and private like a dick, if you don't get it, fuck you, and don't vote

se7ev got this..harder punches..connected none was confusing dumb oor stupid pt..you need to elevate..try to think of some punches or clever disses..the boyfriend line made me laugh..but my advice..dont drop anymore gay lines because this whole website is quick to hate and start talkin bullshit..but anyway..se7ev gets my vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=105535

vote-Poetictendenceez

Yep... way harder verse with WAY harder punches... Se7en... you underestimated dunny... by a LONG shot... don't knwo really what u was spitin... but it wasn't fire... both yall didn't come hard... but yo... Poetic Won... just better punches overall

VOTE-Poetic

Caesar On3

heres the breakdown...

flow:both..no comments
structure:both....Same length....
Punches:poem...He had some witty shit going on....
Personals:poem...Ok some personals were gay from the seven...u need to elevate
multis:no comment
Metas:no comment
Overall:From the breakdown poem gets this by overall..No hate..
seven just u need to elevate;
plz hit up my reopened battle

I spend time on urs now u do to!
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106034

Uppin' for more votes, need some that ain't dick rides, well Uppin' x1

did you just say those are dick riding votes? you are a stupid fuck...haha...uppin (1)

^^Forgot to post the link....here it is, make sure you vote

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=106525

LM, explain your votes you dumb-fuck..that vote should be dq'd - if nothing else cause you're a dumb-ass