Telekinetic vs Avenge
 

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Avenge Know To Open-Spits…
Braid’n His Sisters Hair Was The Last Time Kid Was Holdin Clips
Shit…This Kid Is More Hyped Up To Fail Then The Olsens Tits
Kid Can’t-Be-Serious, The Mans-Delirious…
If He Had Twins He Still Couldn’t Get A Double-You
You Future’s Relation Is ‘Calculated’ In ‘Mathematic Equations’
Me + Battle – Tele= “Trouble-4-You
I Rattle Ya Rhymes Till Rubble-Is-Spewed…
You Couldn’t Blow Phat Rhymes Exhalin Bubbles Of Food
To Put It Simple,Your Screwed…This Kid Is Oblivious, He Don’t Know What To Do
You Fairly Winnin Is Impossible, Less Plausible Than Etheopians Openin-Food

Location Dope? Where you at im there you must be out 2 lunch
Especially after the one two Taktik gave your ass in the 1 2 punch
Man your 16 an already disabled to skill clumsy bet you fall alot
Speakin of fallin on new years he set wishin HIS balls would drop
Call the cops I mangled you in four lines the battles over ring the bell
Ding ding TKO 0 an l your wack as hell an delivered more than mail
This guys mouth is like an ass of a dog no place like home hey toto?
Go there with your dog shit ohh an for gods sake stop eatin that alpo
The pure designs of your rhymes are signs of a disease like the clap
But chances of you gettin claps here are Slim Jim you gettin snapped


*opener he got beat my taktik in 1 2 punch an under location it says dope

avenge beat..his multies basically won the battle not really anything else in this that stood out...

v- avenge
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Calm down playa. ya wastin ya ups. this wasn't even a fuckin battle. tele came wit some punches that blew avenge's shit out the water. the personal opener was a nice touch to the whoppin, and the flow was good as well. Both structures were alright but it was about the flow and Tele had it.

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Originality - Avenge.. fresh concepts ("braiding sisters hair" line)
Punches - Avenge.. more original an witty wordplay made em harder hittin
Personals - Tele.. more of em
Flow - Neither.. all felt like individual punches
Opener - Tele.. personal
Closer - Avenge.. funny shit!

VoTe = Avenge

Swept more catergories.. some nice concepts.. keep elevatin kid.. an no hate Tele.. jus figured u underestimated him.

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opener avenge
punches avenge
closer telekentic
flow telekenetic
multis avenge
personals avenge
vote avenge i was feelin his shit more

telekinetic takes it his verse wus more consitant in punches and metafors he also to the uperhand on the personals with the 1-2 punchline of taktik....
good job by both but my vote goes to Telikinetic...
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