"h1p h0p"
 

new track, called "hip hop"... pretty decent track i think, but the doubles were ass.. u can see it too... i was too lazy to fix it.. n i was weak lyrically.. but its all good... feed would be appreciated...

http://www.soundclick.com/bands/7/v...ctionsmusic.htm

Tight production, I liked the laid back crisp type feel it had. Your voice worked well on the track. Really mellow and relaxing type vibe going on there, enhanced by my herbally induced state of elevation at the moment, I must say this was real good.

~Bounce~

thnx man... note* quality was bad cause i was mixing on shitty headphones... but uppin!

up...

track was pretty good....lyrics were good..i liked the hook doubles...it made it diffrent from the verses..i hate when some one does a song n it sounds like 1 big ass verse...im glad i added the doubles...good track though..nice laid back feal....beat was good..quality was aight...ur elevatin good work

thnx man.. uppin!

i really am feelin the beat, good flow, good words, there have been many good songs called Hip Hop (dead prez, mos def) and this one is no exception. NEver heard youtill now, but I'm impressed! Like the chorus, you worked this beat well.
keep it up man!

glad u enjoyed it man.. uppin this motha fucka...

uppin!!

nice beat, presence is lackin in the chorus but during the verses its fine. Flow is on point, not as smooth as it could be but its still nice. Chorus is ill, I like the melody but might wanna respit it more confident feel me good work tho pz

^^yeah i know what ya mean... thnx though man...

up!

voice is str8... lyrics were on point.. flows nice... and the beat is dope... overall this is nice but ther is still room for improvment....

return the favor...
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107923

thnx... n i'll peep that as soon as possible..

upp!!