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Yo What Up vs. ATL Shawty770
aight son...........
10 lines house rules verses due tonight at 12 est blind spits lets do this dawg........... |
CHECKIN IN...........
im about to get off so ill drop later............ good luck dawg......... |
im finna get off too....i should be back by 12..............ill drop before then.............o yea...........CHECKIN IN!!!!!!!!!!!!
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just so we clear....there is no feedin aight?....................
Are you ready "yo what up" you finna be exposed/ you want me to take it easy on you....i dont suppose/ i dont need you to tell me what i can do and cant/ i see right through you...you faker than a breast implant/ to finish this rap ill guess i have to improvise/ my verses hit you so hard it will knock fear into yo eyes/ afta this you gon be sweatin and breathin all hard/ ive killed you...death is what was on ya card/ i kno you pretty well...even tho we just met/ i can tell itz been hard fo you to keep ya sexuality a secret/ |
spit when ya ready dawg...................ill check back in lata.............................................. ...............
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aight son.........i never feed hombre...........check it out..........yo, yo...........
yo ima start flippin-this-script, no need for an intro, cause everyone knows ima be rippin-dis-bitch/ im whippin-his-spit, this gay as bitch got nothin, wit his "crap" lines its obvious y hes "trippin-on-shit"/ this dudes got no hope so he steals-raps, i was callin someone else out, yd u step in, cause ya deals-crap/ u feel-that? im just ill, shawty?, nah u a fake ass gangsta, this bitch keeps his "caps lock" on so he can say hes seen "real-caps"/ my flows-tight, whereas this bitch has moved his shit to "death valley" just to prove that hes a "low-life"/ ur just below-my-might, cause ur shit just dont give "pleasure", so the only way he wins is to "blow-the-site"/ what were u thinkin when u decided to but-in, i could fill this post wit pics of knives and u still couldnt "cut-a-win"/ ill put ya guts-in-tin, my punches ull disable ya body, ill burn ya, no one wants to hear ya, so fuck-ur-skin/ just walk-this-way, uve been here before, and its time to lose again, cause my rhymes still rock-ya-say/ dude ur talk-is-gay, i mean shit, how the fuck u supposed to be good when u rap like the "hawks-play"!/ EXPLANATIONS - 1st bar - self explanatory 2nd bar - i was callin someone else out then he said hed battle, and shawty means like gangsta 3rd bar - death valley is at the lowest elevation in the country 4th bar - self explanatory 5th bar - hes from atlanta, the atlanta hawks suck ass at basketball -------------------------------------------------------------------------------- UPPIN DIS BITCH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
umm....what da hell you talkin bout in yo 2nd bar.....4th line...................whateva.................... ...
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damn you kno what else......you broke yo own rule.............dat iz WAY ova 10 lines man..................
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^^^not really.........if u count the slashes, they represent when the lines break..........you should count 10 dumbass.........dont try sway votes by sayin my shit makes since or im breakin rules..........fuck u dawg...........dont be gay like dat..........
UPPIN # 1!!!!!!!!!!!!! LETS GET SOME VOTES UP IN HERRE!!!!!!!!!! |
yeah realy you tryin to get peeps to sway for you man cuz you know you got yo ass merked...
iight Yowhatup- tore it up ni punches and personals... just overall was ill... he gotta fuckin ill opener.. ATL- i think you need to elevate like A TON... that wasnt good at all ur punches were weak as hell and so were ur personals... get better... VOTE-YOWHATUP |
agreed with the newb...
v/yowhatup hit this up: http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107968 |
^^thanx for the opinions holmes............................
UPPIN # 2 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
i aitn tryin to sway shit so get ya facts straight....i made a mistake and what.....i dont care bout dis dat much.........
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i dun even gotta stress by how much yo what up got dis.....
itz sad really..... punches: it obvios flow: ^^ strucuture:atl......yo what up....u gotta werk on makin it em a lil' shorter vote: yo what up(kinda obvious) plze hit dis battle up......plzeeeeeee http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=107625 |
^^^thanx for the vote..........
UPPIN # 3 !!!!!!!!!!! LETS GET SOME VOTES MOTHAFUCKAS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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