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.:K:. 02-01-04 12:26 PM

.:K:. Vs sdizzle
 
yo ite,
you spit 1st within 20 mins,
ill spit after 20 mins of yours,
no d/r
no crew
no feeding
no freeposting
no hate.

......good luck newb..........pz

.:K:. 02-01-04 12:27 PM

checking in................................................ .................................................. pz

sdizzle 02-01-04 12:28 PM

ya ya ya, im checking in

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sdizzle 02-01-04 12:42 PM

he cant make up his own shit, he has to spit~a~bit
gets games and is penis confused, they contra~dict
im new to this site, but dont get it confused
ur the woman of the relationship, the first to be abused
im a rapboard verteran, u already know who im better than
he fills his room with airconditioners, just so hell have fans
us the newb, why u trying to face heavyweights
he started this battle a year ago, and still ends up late
sdizzle just turned this K into killed, thats a ko~for sdizzle aka sdiddy
and you see my dicks in his hand and still cant beat me

.:K:. 02-01-04 12:55 PM

wak^.............o/well,

listen bitch bars of soap in jail..be the only thing your dropping,
and believe me when i say..your dick aint the only thing thats floppin,
little wak hoe..fuck you on this site im well known and respected,
like standing next to nuclear bombs..the way dizzle's getin affected,
fuck an opener or a closer bitch.....
.........my hole verse is put down to rupture.......
sdizzle's letting out a waste of air..and i aint tlking about a puncher,
its fight club mother fucker.this match is newb against heavywieght champ,
your verse was simular to the scouts..the way the hole thin was camp,
fake ass vet claiming no set..no record little bitch called sdizzle,
k's officially merked this cat..stop bragin of snoop..
......cus im the realist forshizzle....


quick merking...........pz

sdizzle 02-01-04 01:00 PM

ya my shit was wac, u probably didn't get the first line which is y u didn't like it

Virtuoso 02-01-04 01:01 PM

s dizzle actually started good but then fell off........... an K started bas but then pulled it out sickly....K brought multis that he didn't ahv eto identify an wordplay the sent blows to take s dizzle.... he got it

vote - K

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Virtuoso 02-01-04 01:03 PM

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...927#post1146927

return the honest favor......................peace

KiLlEr EmCeE 02-01-04 01:04 PM

ok ok......vote automatically goez 2 k......"who waz hiz opponent?"....nah j/p.....ite ok battle....but k takes it for better punches n flow.....ur strucutre waz "aiight"
break d
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punches: k....hard hitting.....n made sense........dizzle- urz were ok...but evelevate man...
flow: k.....eazier to read and follow and on one topic.....mostly......dizzlle- ur waz ite 2...but add suttin in it.....kinda borin....
structure:............................werk on urz.......both.....
vote: k....for ^ those 2 reazons .......
nice battle
propz 2 both
hit dis battle up....
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111358

Vote disqualified for suspected d/r. - Axiom

Brethren 02-01-04 01:19 PM

Punches: K, the I ain't talking about a puncher was a decent line, sdizzle didn't have any punches, made his verse pretty weak
Wordplay: Sdizzle, the contra-dict line was actually a good wordplay, but there was no other wordplay
Multis: Neither, neither of you flipped multis, flip some, adds complexity
Personals: K, the stop braggin off snoop was the best personal
Opener: Sdizzle, The contra-dict line was nice, K quit using those gay jokes
Closer: K, Ended with a personal, Sdizzles ending, and most of his verse didn't even rhyme

Vote - K

Overall more polished verse, Sdizzle, you need to actually rhyme to rap, that's probably the biggest element. Also throw in some creative punches, both of you.

listen bitch bars of soap in jail..be the only thing your dropping,
Best line of the battle, by K

gets games and is penis confused, they contra~dict
Best line, by Sdizzle

Return the favor with an honest vote in my sig

Meters 02-01-04 01:38 PM

K takes this battle for sheer complexity, Dizzle fell off with the bar about K being his abused wife. That doesn't cut it man, you have to think more in depth like that. K's been around for a while and he's really elevating again, it's good to see. His punches, flow, structure, and overall message of this verse were all hard and on key without the complexity, structure problems that plagued Dizzle's verse so he gets my vote.

Drop a vote if you would here http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111365

.:K:. 02-01-04 02:08 PM

ok thx alot................................meters thx man.................plz remember 2 poll tho......................uppin(1)................. ...pz

.:K:. 02-01-04 02:28 PM

4-0......................................uppin(2)... .................................................. ...pz

Potent 02-01-04 02:41 PM

k got this he came strong in the punches..and his flow was str8 ...he also had a couple personals...dizzle u punches was really not hittin hrd enough..ur flow was ok kinda fell off at points..and you had no personals

Vote:K

please drop a vote on this its 4-0
http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/showthread.php?t=111122

Wise Ways 02-01-04 02:49 PM

Meh....K takes this.He had punches
Dizzle..didn't..he attempted to have em..but his wording was too horiable
And his name is wack...flow was aight..
But k had punches and wordplay..
And thats too much for someone with nothing

so

v/ K

hit this up with an honest vote...

http://www.rapbattles.com/forum/sho...t=111324&page=1

Vote disqualified for inadequate feedback. Please see this thread if you need help on what qualifies as an acceptable explanation. - Axiom


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